John R Hudson wrote:
> Hi Richard
> 
> Here are some suggested corrections for the Additional features manual.

Hello John,

most corrections are in.

> 5.1.1 Introduction
> [Version 7.00 (Jauary 2010) is available from the website listed; so this 
> whole section needs to be updated; I am happy to have a go at this if you 
> would like]

nobody else will do otherwise ;)

> 5.13 Kluwer
> [Kluwer is now part of Springer and the url links to:
> http://www.springer.com/?SGWID=0-102-0-0-0
> ? delete whole section]

if delete then not only this sections but other kluwer related stuff we have,
dunno whether this should happen.

> 5.19 RevTeX4
> [paragraph 1]The Revtex 4 textclass works with the American Physical Sociey's 
> RevTeX 4.1 class. [I haven't tried this but RevTeX4.1 was issued in August 
> 2010 and the announcement refers mostly to bugfixes and additional features 
> and only mentions having the most recent version of natbib installed as 
> essential]

iirc there has been some movement in trunk wrt revtex. perhaps this didn't got
updated.

> 6.1 Checking TeX
> [chktex is now listed as obsolete in CTAN; this section needs deleting]

iirc its still living and JMarc is one of its maintainers.

> 6.2.2.5 Undo Last Checkin
> This pretends that the last check in never happened . . . ['pretends that' is 
> more idiomatic]

but the last checkin is really deleted, so this is not good description either.


last but not least - its tedious work to manually enter again the corrections
and its must be even more tedious for you. why can't we use change tracking?
or -- if its not technical problem for you - use living version of manuals
via subversion and send us patches? it would take 5% of time on both sides.

also using lyx 2.0 from trunk would make possible to review new changes from
1.6 to 2.0 due to the comparison feature.

thanks for your review,
pavel

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