At 10:59 04-11-2011, Murray S. Kucherawy wrote:
This message starts a two-week Working Group Last Call on the redaction document, ending on 11/18. Alessandro sent some text for consideration so those are already included in

From Section 2:

  "4. Compute a digest of that string with any hashing/digest algorithm
      such as SHA1"

A reference to RFC 6234 could be added for "SHA". I'll leave it to the security folks to determine which algorithm to pick. Using any hashing/digest algorithm will be viewed as unsecure. It would be better to mention the minimally acceptable one.

I suggest separating Section 3 into different sections, one for security and the other for privacy. The current section only covers privacy. Does redaction (see algorithm) create any security issues?

From Section 3:

  "If further protections are required, implementors may wish to
   consider establishing legal contracts or other non-technology-based
   agreements between the relevant entities."

This is a technical specification. Legal contracts do not increase the level of privacy. It would be better to remove that sentence. I suggest focusing on the information disclosure angle if the aim is to have a privacy considerations section.

BTW, the title of the draft is "Redaction of Potentially Sensitive Data from Mail Abuse Reports". My reading is that the algorithm is to only redact the local-part of an email address (message header and body). Most, if not all, the WG participants know how to circumvent that. :-) The title could be "redaction of email addresses from mail abuse reports".

Regards,
-sm
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