On Sat, 2007-08-18 at 07:51 +1200, John Williams wrote:
> > How's this look?
> >
> > http://www.gnome.org/~shaunm/notes2-20/index.html
> This looks great!  Thanks for all the hard work that has gone into
> producing this page.
> 
> If you are interested, some areas for improvement are listed below.
> 
> "GNOME 2.20 includes all of the improvements made in GNOME 2.12 "
> 
> Do we mean GNOME 2.12 or 2.18 above?  GNOME 2.12 is mentioned several times.

Already fixed in svn.

> "But the shear number of enhancements make it impossible to list every
> change and improvement that have been made"
> 
> Should be:
> 
> "But the sheer number of enhancements makes it impossible to list
> every change and improvement that has been made"
> 
>  Note the spelling mistake: "shear number of..." should be "Sheer number of 
> ..."

OK. I'll fix that in case it's reused for 2.20. But remember that the
content you see there is the 2.14 content, not the not-yet-written 2.20
content.

> "Six months from the day that GNOME 2.20 is released GNOME 2.16 will
> follow and build on the fantastic base of its predecessor.
> 
> Things to look forward to in GNOME 2.16 include:  ..."
> 
> Do we mean GNOME 2.22  rather than GNOME 2.16?  ;-)  And what about
> the versions of GTK and Cairo?  And, I, suppose, all the other
> features mentioned in that section?

Again, fixed in svn already.

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