Hi, > Was checking out the release notes draft. Minor comments: > > - "Ubuntu Linux" is a phrase not used by the Ubuntu project. It > should either simply be "Ubuntu", or something like "Ubuntu GNU/Linux > distribution".
I agree. > - Two of the images on the page are particularly large in file size. > rnintroduction-screenshot.png is 400kb and rnusers-eog.png is 580kb. > They are both very nice, but a bit largish for slower connections. > Given that rnintroduction-screenshot.png is visible on the first page of > the release notes, it may be worth replacing with something lighter. > Given that it's a scaled-down image anyway, makes sense to use a jpg > instead that takes 250kb from a quick test here. +1. > - "The Release Notes are available in several languages..." This > paragraph follows the one ending "You can learn more about the changes > that happened in GNOME 2.18 from its release notes." It's probably just > me, but it would be more clear to replace it with "This release notes > are available in several languages...". I didn't get it. What exactly chould be changed? > - Evince section doesn't say whether you can save the filled-in PDF > files. Any evince maintainer around to confirm? > - May want to link Cairo to its website as it's an external module. > Also, technically, "Cairo" should be replaced by "cairo graphics > library", not capitalized. Trademark policy? Murray, what do you think? --lucasr -- marketing-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
