Thanks, Brian. I agree with all your comments and will incorporate them. (The deskbar changes ended up in communication because I originally tried to make that a "web 2.0 connection" type category but that didn't work well.) Anybody else? Any of our regular press writing folks?
Stormy On Wed, Sep 24, 2008 at 5:03 PM, Brian Cameron <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>wrote: > > Stormy: > > Better late than never, I think we should put together a press release. >> I believe it should be short and highlight at most 3 things/themes. Or at >> least the first paragraph should say everything important and highlight at >> most 3 things and then the rest of the press release can include more >> detail. >> >> Here's the three I'd suggest just from reading the release notes: >> > > - A new suite of communication tools: audio/video conferencing (Ekiga), >> > > "communication and multimedia" might be more accurate. > > Ekiga isn't new. The Ekiga 3.0 release is a great step forward, though. > Might want to make that more clear. > > new instant messaging client (Empathy), even better digital tv, and >> deskbar >> plug-ins to bring the web and tools to your environment. (Might be >> better >> just to highlight audio/video conferencing tool.) >> > > The Deskbar changes aren't really related to communication or > multimedia. > > Also the improved sound theme support fits into "multimedia". > > - Continued support of the core GNOME values with enhanced accessibility >> features and support for developers. (Could list a few examples.) >> > > Although the release notes don't highlight this, there has been a fair > bit of infrastructure work. gnome-session, gnome-settings-daemon and > GDM have all been rewritten in order to take better advantage of D-Bus > and work better. > > Brian >
-- marketing-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
