I would recommend staying with second person "You" but being more formal "GNOME is" rather than contractions.
Paul On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 1:09 PM, Darton Williams <dart...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 7:32 AM, Lucas Rocha <luc...@gnome.org> wrote: > > > Download: > > - Main page looks ok, a final review would be nice. > > http://website-editors.gnome.org/download > Marking as "Draft Available", proofread. > > Quick note: the "How to Install GNOME" section uses contractions > (GNOME is -> GNOME's) resulting in an informal voice, is this the > intent? > "You're already running a Linux or UNIX distribution, but GNOME's > missing? Don't hesitate: GNOME's very..." > > > - Distributions page is a bit outdated. Someone needs to check the > > data and update it accordingly with latest GNOME releases. > > http://website-editors.gnome.org/download/distributions > Verified distros listed, added a few more shipping 2.28. Marking as > "Draft Available". > > > - Installation page has a too long intro. Has a lot of TODO items in > > the shown data. Needs volunteers. > > - Live Images content looks mostly ok, a final review would be nice. > > Has a TODO item about Bittorrents. > > - GNOME apps on Windows still needs content. Needs volunteers. > > - GNOME apps on Mac still needs content. Needs volunteers. > > - Latest Sources needs intro. Has a bunch of TODO items. Needs > volunteers. > > > > Best, > > dartonw > _______________________________________________ > gnome-web-list mailing list > gnome-web-l...@gnome.org > http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-web-list >
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