Hi Calum!
Il 22/03/2013 13:06, Calum Benson ha scritto:
My initial reaction is that if I didn't already know what GNOME was, I'd probably have stopped reading by the time I got to the quote in the fifth paragraph that gave me any clues :) (Yes, I know there's an obligatory "About GNOME" section at the bottom, but people still tend to read press releases from top to bottom.) The all-important first paragraph, in particular, seems particularly light on useful details:
IMHO, I believe we should be more proud to be part of a project such a GNOME. I'm sure we don't need to detail explain what GNOME is and what GNOME makes: GNOME is THE leader in free software DE/project, and I'm sure journalists know it.
A press release gives a news and a journalist want to know that news. What are we announcing? That GNOME 3.8 has been released. The institutional sections of About GNOME gives all the information about GNOME itself, but I believe we're here to celebrate a new release, not to explain what GNOME is: be proud to be part of GNOME, be sure other people know it.
My two cents, Cheers, Flavia -- marketing-list mailing list marketing-list@gnome.org https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list
