Just finished proofreading and I can't figure out how to leave comments there.

  

I would appreciate someone double-checking the code formatting I added to make
sure those references are correct.

  

The post switches back and forth between addressing a second person (you) and
third person perspective (one), which is probably something only a grammer
nerd would notice, but I think it toes the line of coming off casually versus
formally in terms of tone. I would pick one and stick with it.

  

Also I can't figure out what's being said here, under the Lesson Learned #9:

  

**CouchDB is fortunate to be able new databases** with a single PUT so Jan 
Lehnardt (@janl) came up with the idea of dicing the database names every time. 
That way, every test starts off a reliable and blank new DB with a unique name 
**(and Heisenbugs due to a DB delete still needing to free resources cannot 
happen).**

As good citizens, tests still clean DBs after running.

The highlighting is my own so I wouldn't figure which sentences read tricky.

  

There are places where folks are referred to, who I would link to (Jan and the
test-writing person mentioned at the beginning). Otherwise, looks good. :)

  

  

Jenn Turner

The Neighbourhoodie Software GmbH  
Adalbertstr. 7-8, 10999 Berlin  
[neighbourhood.ie](http://neighbourhood.ie/ "http://neighbourhood.ie/"; )  
  

Handelsregister HRB 157851 B Amtsgericht Charlottenburg  
Geschäftsführung: Jan Lehnardt

  

On May 12 2016, at 4:48 pm, Andy Wenk <[email protected]> wrote:  

> Hi all,

>

> I created the post as a draft. The preview is available here:
https://couchdbblog.wordpress.com/?p=990&preview=true

>

> Sebastian, I think it’s now Jenn’s turn. What would be good to have is a
“About the author” section. You can “borrow” ideas from Robert’s post here:
https://blog.couchdb.org/2016/04/26/databases-arent-boring/ ;-)

>

> All the best

>

> Andy  
\--  
Andy Wenk  
Hamburg - Germany  
RockIt!

>

> GPG public key:
https://pgp.mit.edu/pks/lookup?op=get&search=0x4F1D0C59BC90917D

>

>  
> On 12 May 2016, at 22:40, Sebastian Rothbucher
<[email protected]> wrote:  
>  
> Hi Andy,  
>  
> that would be awesome, thanks! Pls. let me know how I can help also...  
>  
> Best  
> Sebastian  
>  
> On Thu, May 12, 2016 at 10:31 PM, Andy Wenk <[email protected]>
wrote:  
>  
>> Hi all,  
>>  
>> I can put your blog post to our CouchDB WP blog and Jenn can edit
there.  
>> Let me know if you want me to do so.  
>>  
>> Cheers  
>>  
>> Andy  
>> \--  
>> Andy Wenk  
>> Hamburg - Germany  
>> RockIt!  
>>  
>> GPG public key:  
>> https://pgp.mit.edu/pks/lookup?op=get&search=0x4F1D0C59BC90917D  
>>  
>>  
>>  
>>  
>>> On 12 May 2016, at 17:36, Sebastian Rothbucher <  
>> [email protected]> wrote:  
>>>  
>>> Hi Jenn,  
>>>  
>>> I can use our team's Blog (https://blog.akquinet.de/) to publish
unless  
>>> better ideas come up. I don't think we have a tough timeline -
rather  
>> after  
>>> people found time to give feedback I can go ahead and publish ;-)  
>>>  
>>> Your thoughts are most welcome (& so are all others).  
>>>  
>>> Thanks a lot! - and best  
>>>  
>>> Sebastian  
>>>  
>>>  
>>>  
>>>  
>>> On Thu, May 12, 2016 at 4:41 PM, Jenn Turner
<[email protected]>  
>> wrote:  
>>>  
>>>> I can definitely do that. When are you thinking to publish?
What's the  
>>>> timeline :)  
>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>> Jenn Turner  
>>>>  
>>>> The Neighbourhoodie Software GmbH  
>>>> Adalbertstr. 7-8, 10999 Berlin  
>>>> [neighbourhood.ie](http://neighbourhood.ie/
"http://neighbourhood.ie/";  
>> )  
>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>> Handelsregister HRB 157851 B Amtsgericht Charlottenburg  
>>>> Geschäftsführung: Jan Lehnardt  
>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>> On May 12 2016, at 6:05 am, Garren Smith
<[email protected]>  
>> wrote:  
>>>>  
>>>>> Hi Sebastian,  
>>>>  
>>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>>> That is a great blogpost. Really interesting and I think
it would be  
>>>> useful  
>>>> for a lot of people. I think it would be great if Jenn, or
anyone else  
>>>> interested, could give it a proof read and edit.  
>>>>  
>>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>>> Cheers  
>>>> Garren  
>>>>  
>>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>>> On Tue, May 10, 2016 at 11:10 PM, Sebastian Rothbucher
<  
>>>> [email protected]> wrote:  
>>>>  
>>>>>  
>>>>  
>>>>> > Hi marketers,  
>>>> >  
>>>> >  
>>>> > before and during jsunconf, I had the chance to help
out a little  
>> with  
>>>> the  
>>>> > JS-based tests for CouchDB (finally made it into
CouchDB via PR  
>> #410)  
>>>> –  
>>>> and  
>>>> > I did some writeup on it in a (draft) blog post.
(unlike Robert, I  
>>>> didn't  
>>>> > go to a fancy café, but still...)  
>>>> >  
>>>> > If people find the post interesting (otherwise: no
hard feelings  
>> ;-)  
>>>> ),  
>>>> I'm  
>>>> > more than happy 2 share it – but I'd need (and
appreciate) some  
>>>> feedback  
>>>> > before.  
>>>> >  
>>>> >  
>>>> > Anyways: here's the draft – any thoughts and
feedback welcome:  
>>>> >  
>>>> >  
>>>>  
>>>>  
>>
https://gist.github.com/sebastianrothbucher/5e30ebbd98c64330f61ce87a9b8a4d00  
>>>> >  
>>>> >  
>>>> > Thanks – and best  
>>>> >  
>>>> > Sebastian  
>>>> >  
>>>>  
>>>>  
>>  
>>

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