At first glance, it looks good and reads well. I will do some nitpicking later.
Larry Cafiero On Mon, Sep 27, 2010 at 10:11 PM, Robyn Bergeron <[email protected]>wrote: > I've written up the Beta announcement, attempting to breathe a little > bit of life into it so it's not a carbon copy of the F13 announcement: > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F14_Beta_announcement > > I would love some feedback and eyeballs ASAP, particularly around the > features (especially Spice!) to make sure I haven't goofed anything > up. If you want to polish, feel free to do that as well. :) > > ALSO: I really, really need to figure out how / where to get / make > the referral links. > > For example, the link to the F13 feature list looked like this: > http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Releases/13/FeatureList?wkanF13b <---- > how do I get more of this goodness to add to the Beta announcement?? > > (On that note, it'd be useful to know if we did anything as far as > looking at the referral links we utilized last time around; if nobody > is doing anything with that, we should figure out how to do something > with it, at least figure out if we have procured any interesting > information that way as far as where our traffic is coming from.) > > Beta is TOMORROW (yay!!!) so, while I hate to pull the whole "fire > alarm because I'm running late" thing, well.... Fire Alarm because I'm > running late :) > > Cheers, > > Robyn > -- > marketing mailing list > [email protected] > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing >
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