I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be "I want to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with "I will.....". The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm distance. Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort.
/Roger On 2 May 2013 17:01, "mario juliano grande balletta" < [email protected]> wrote: > Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme, however, > the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit > the theme. > > You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or > perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or > melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme. > > Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please > do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a > designer/artist, only an observer. > > Thanks again for the work and efforts! Much appreciated! > > On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal < > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi all, >> Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join. >> You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 . >> It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin) >> Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same . >> Regards >> Nitesh Narayan Lal >> -- >> marketing mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing > > > > -- > marketing mailing list > [email protected] > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing >
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