On 12/02/2014 10:49 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote: > As you guys are crafting improved notes, for better consistency, it > would be great to write in present tense about the release. > > INCONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar will include special flavor crystals > that defy gravity and help you fly like Superman." > > CONSISTENT: "Fedora 21 Foobar includes special flavor crystals that > defy gravity and help you fly like Superman."
Be sure to use passive voice too. Paul likes that.[1] Best, jzb [1] May not be entirely true. Consult your attorney. Offer not valid in Utah. -- Joe Brockmeier | Principal Cloud & Storage Analyst [email protected] | http://community.redhat.com/ Twitter: @jzb | http://dissociatedpress.net/
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