Hi Ankur,
Looks good but watch the typo "Liunx" on the second page, top of the middle
column.

Cheers

On Friday, January 23, 2015, Ankur Sinha <[email protected]> wrote:

> <snip>
>
> Here's an updated version of the workstation flyer:
>
>
> https://ankursinha.fedorapeople.org/fedora-flyer-workstation/fedora-flyer-workstation-opensans.pdf
>
> Changes:
> - add more text on devassistant
> - remove hyphenation completely
> - replace e-mail on front with URL to ask.fpo.o
> - font changed to opensans (Mizmo suggested this on the desktop list)
> - Remove "best of HiDPI"
> - add "epiphany based web applications" to the web service integration
> bit so users have an idea of where and what to look for
> - improved the optical media bit
> - add a link to the F22 changeset
>
> How does this look? :)
>
> I've gone ahead and added a link to the F22 changeset in the last
> section - is this OK?
> --
> Thanks,
> Regards,
> Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD"
>
> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Ankursinha
>
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