Hi, I have made the necessary alterations. Please let me know if anything else is required.
*Regards,* Trupti Kini Research Assistant, FOSSEE Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/ On Mon, Feb 9, 2015 at 8:48 PM, Ryan Lerch <[email protected]> wrote: > On 02/08/2015 09:40 AM, Trupti Kini wrote: > > Hi, > I have posted the article for publishing. How long it usually takes > for the review? I wanted to add images to the article but I din't find *Add > media* option. Can anyone please guide me? > > > *Regards, * > Trupti Kini > Research Assistant, FOSSEE > Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay > http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/ > > > Thanks for contributing to the Fedora Magazine, here are a few quick > notes on your post: > > * Maybe tighten up the headline / title of the post a bit to make it more > news-y. Something like: > "Fedora community in Mumbai, India celebrates the Fedora 21 release" -- we > have a global audience, so most won't know where or what "Homi Bhabha > Centre for Science Education" is (i had to google it) > > * I'd probably open the article with a bit of filler about what a release > party is. Maybe something like: > "Every time a new release of Fedora becomes available, Fedora user > communities around the world gather to share the new release with each > other, upgrade their systems, and eat celebratory cake. In December, a > release party was held at the..." > > * With the content under the opening paragraph, it is a little hard to > follow if some of the statements about Fedora (GNOME, Openstack etc), were > said by the speakers you call out, or if they are just statements about the > release. > > * For an article like this, describing what the speakers talked about is > good, but try not to get into too much detail. Some of the quotes you have > there are good stuff to include too. > > cheers, > ryanlerch > > > > -- > marketing mailing list > [email protected] > List info or to change your subscription: > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing >
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