Hi Matthew, I like it it covers the highlights of each of the releases. The only thing that looks out of place is the Fedora 22 graphic at the bottom. If it was me I would move that to the top, that way it captures the readers attention and then they keep on reading.
- Chris Roberts ----- Original Message ----- From: "Matthew Miller" <[email protected]> To: [email protected] Sent: Monday, May 25, 2015 7:25:25 PM Subject: last minute review of release announcement? I plan to send this out tomorrow morning at the Appointed Time. <https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F22_Final_release_announcement> Thanks especially to Joe Brockmeier for writing some of the best bits here. A lot of the rest is cobbled together from the F22 talking points and beta announcements. It seems pretty good, but maybe a little bit too... releasenotesy. Any last minute adjustments or feedback? -- Matthew Miller <[email protected]> Fedora Project Leader -- marketing mailing list [email protected] List info or to change your subscription: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing -- marketing mailing list [email protected] List info or to change your subscription: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
