Agree with William. If we're going to change something let's ask Neville first.
Cheers, Sylvia On Sunday, 7 February 2016, William Moreno <williamjmore...@gmail.com> wrote: > CC Neville, it is his interview, I do not feel good to change something > and do not ask him > El 07/02/2016 14:51, "Justin W. Flory" <jflo...@gmail.com > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jflo...@gmail.com');>> escribió: > >> On 02/07/2016 11:32 AM, charles profitt wrote: >> > I just finished editing the Neville Cross article. I want to thank both >> > Neville and William Moreno for working on the article; excellent work >> > gentlemen. >> > >> > Here is the link to the article for final review before publication. >> > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=11601&preview_id=11601 >> >> Overall, the article looks excellent to me as well. Thanks to all >> involved in putting this article together! Thanks Neville, William, and >> Charles. :) >> >> I only have one lingering thought on this article -- in the last section >> about Software, there are some pretty sharp words said about GNOME. >> While I completely agree that constructive criticism is important and it >> is a good thing to voice concerns, I don't feel like this Magazine >> article is the best place to do it. >> >> Instead of focusing on the negatives of GNOME, I would try to replace it >> with some positive thoughts either on the desktop or another >> environment. Using positive words over the negative will have a more >> resounding impact on the reader and will also reflect well on Fedora. >> Since there is such a large readership base for the Magazine, I could >> imagine someone reading the last bit and thinking, "Oh, even Fedora >> contributors don't even like Fedora!" Obviously this isn't true if you >> read the rest of the article, but it can be easy for someone who is >> skimming to take things out of context. >> >> However, like I said, overall, I think this is a fantastic article and >> is a great testament to the Fedora community. With a little bit of >> rephrasing to the bottom portion, I think this article will be ready to >> ship on Friday. >> >> -- >> Cheers, >> Justin W. Flory >> jflo...@gmail.com <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jflo...@gmail.com');> >> >> >> -- >> marketing mailing list >> marketing@lists.fedoraproject.org >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','marketing@lists.fedoraproject.org');> >> List info or to change your subscription: >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing >> >
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