Hey man, Sorry my kid is getting moved into his own room and it's spawned a whole ordeal getting things up and running. I have screen shots waiting to upload as well as a couple of videos, but my target time was 1-2 weeks after F24 launches. I appreciate the other feedback, I think it'll be helpful and I'll try to incorporate those ideas in my next draft. =)
On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 4:43 PM Justin W. Flory <[email protected]> wrote: > Hey Brian, > > Wanted to follow up on the status of the "Getting started with Fedora > Jam" article. In our meeting today, we reviewed the article, and it > looks good so far. We had a few suggestions for ways to expand the > article a little bit. > > Adding some screenshots in of some software in the Jam Lab might be a > good idea to help give readers a visual of some of the software > available for use. This could be a screenshot of actual music production > or just a demo of something running, but any kind of screenshot should > do fine. > > Additionally, we also thought it would be good to offer some more > background and introduction for Fedora Jam. Some questions that may be > helpful to answer to introduce the lab: > > 1) What can Fedora Jam be used for? > 2) What kind of software is available for music production or mixing? > 3) Why might a musician be interested in using Fedora Jam? > > This should help offer a good introduction to the Lab and explain what > it is to readers. Adding download links to the bottom would also be > helpful to point readers where to get their hands on it! > > Everything else so far looks good! We're looking at having this > published on Wednesday, 2016-06-01. If you think you would be able to > have the screenshots and/or edits in by the end of Sunday, that would be > best so we have time to do a final editing pass and get a featured image > for the article. > > Let us know if you have any questions or other ideas for the article! > Thanks for working on this piece. :) > > > -- > Cheers, > Justin W. Flory > [email protected] > >
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