On 6 June 2016 at 12:33, Sumantro Mukherjee <[email protected]> wrote:
> > > ----- Original Message ----- > > From: "Ryan Lerch" <[email protected]> > > To: "Fedora Marketing team" <[email protected]> > > Sent: Monday, June 6, 2016 4:35:10 PM > > Subject: [Marketing] Release Validation Testing article > > > > HI all, > > > > I have finished editing the release validation testing article. > > > > I edited it down a fair bit to try to provide a better hook for users > that > > might want to get involved with Fedora by helping out with relvar > testing. > > > > If anyone else could also throw a quick eye over it from this > perspective, > > that would be useful. otherwise, if the original author is happy with the > > edits, this should be ready to go out! > > > > also added a featured image! > > > > cheers, > > ryanlerch > > > Hey Ryan > I went through and it look very good! > > Overall looks good - but the opening sentence felt a little hard to parse "If you are looking for a way to get involved in helping to make Fedora, completing some test cases for Release Validation Testing is a quick way to get started helping Fedora." The multiple helping fedora bit read a little awkwardly I thought ... s/to get started helping Fedora/to begin contributing/ ?
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