Oh, thank you very much!! Sorry I couldn't attend.
Cheers, Sylvia. On Thursday, 9 June 2016, Justin W. Flory <[email protected]> wrote: > On 06/09/2016 02:11 PM, Sylvia Sánchez wrote: > >> >> Hi Huiren! >> >> Thanks, you're right, sounds way better in the way you wrote it, I'll >> fix it. >> Yes, you're right, it's "editing tools". I don't know why I wrote it >> the other way. Thanks for pointing out. >> >> >> Cheers, >> Sylvia >> >> >> > Hey Sylvia, we reviewed this article in the meeting today, and Paul is > going to work on getting a featured image and editing to have it go out on > Monday, June 13. > > Thanks for writing this one! :) > > >> On Thursday, 9 June 2016, Huiren Woo <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> Hi Sylvia, >> >> Thanks for taking your time to write up this article! Amazing >> screenshots as a visual reference! >> >> Here are some comments: >> >> "Edition tools" - Did you mean 'Editing tools'? >> "It’s simple, tidy and lightweight, letting you manage your images >> by tags, folders and sites." - English here is a little odd, might >> wanna rephrase it to something like 'Its simplicity, tidiness allows >> you to manage your images by tags, folders and sites. On top of that, >> it's really lightweight.' >> The ending is a bit abrupt, might be good to have something to >> sum it up. >> >> >> Thanks! >> >> Best Regards, >> Woo Huiren >> Fedora Ambassador & Marketing | Open Organization Ambassador >> >> https://twitter.com/woohuiren >> >> > -- > Cheers, > Justin W. Flory > [email protected] > >
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