On 12/4/13 12:53 AM, Rob Weir wrote: > A while back I mentioned that I was interested in putting up a > donation page targeted toward end users of OpenOffice. I wanted to > take a subset of of the material from the ASF pages [1] [2], strip out > the stuff related to corporate donations, and put a new page in a > place where OpenOffice users would be more likely to see it. > > You cans see a draft of this page here: > > http://www.openoffice.org/donations.html > > Please send along any corrections, concerns, etc. I'd like to go live > with this later this week, in time to benefit from the end of > year/holiday giving spirit. > > Also, if you think you can do much better, in terms of the text, the > pitch, the look, the layout, etc., then we can set up multiple > versions of this page, and do A/B testing to see which version > performs best with real users. If you want to send me an alternative > version, you can base it on the source from my version [3].
I am fine with this, it reads well and give all the needed information. The headline "Volunteer Opportunities with the Apache OpenOffice Project" overlap the underlying when you resize the page (small devices). It's a minor issue but maybe we can shorten the sentence. Juergen > > [1] http://www.apache.org/foundation/sponsorship.html > > [2] http://www.apache.org/foundation/contributing.html > > [3] > https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/donations.html > > Regards, > > -Rob > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] > For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected] > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
