On Fri, 2010-12-31 at 03:23 -0500, Marc Paré wrote: > Hi Drew: > > First loop: > > * First off I would remove the quotation marks. There is no need for > them here. > * Apply proper punctuation to all slides. > * At the start, "The Next Decade Manifesto" seems too fast, it is hard > to read. I would suggest slowing it down for legibility. > * The ending is a little choppy, but I think you know this already. > > Second loop: > * Add punctuation and remove quotation marks. > * The start (Document Foundation) is too choppy. > * The manifesto fly-in is good but IMO it stays static too long before > the window overlays start. I would shorten this part up a little. > * The overlay windows are great. > * End is choppy. >
Marc, Great - thanks for the feedback - I think loop_b is the winner here, but with the display window from _c and the timing of _a...ROFL.. Happy new year by the way, Eh! Anyway - I'll take care of the punctuation. Will be working on a true final run for loop_b first, and next. In the meantime I've been working on the next set of files..see next email. Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
