On Mon, Feb 28, 2011 at 1:25 PM, Marc Paré <[email protected]> wrote:
> Le 2011-02-28 13:04, Carl Symons a écrit :
>>
>> Nice.
>>
>> It could probably use a little more tweaking. Maybe when Drew returns
>> from the SCALE Cloud 9; he usually has some good ideas. And it would
>> be helpful to incorporate what was learned at SCALE.
>>
>> I'm not thrilled with "Bold LibreOffice Fundraising Goal!". It sounds
>> like hype, and it isn't really all that bold. €50K in 8 days is over
>> €200K for the fundraising period. So "bold" to me would be a new
>> specific objective of €250,000 to be done by Mar21.
>>
>> How about "Revised LibreOffice Fundraising Goal!"? Or go big with "The
>> Quarter Million Challenge". Or be specific about what the 1, 2 or 3
>> year budget is and show that. (I prefer a 3 year budget amount to a
>> big number picked out of the air.)
>
> Hmm, we have to watch what we put on this as it may impact the SC plans for
> LibreOffice. If we keep it somewhat generic, it would be better. As far as
> €200K goes, I think that anyone would be surprised if we reached this ...
> even more so than the original objective. Specifying another amount would
> also suggest another SC meeting about the amount, which, IMO would be like
> asking the same people to donate twice.
>
> I think the SC was taken so much by surprise that they really had not firmed
> up any prioritized list of specific expenditures. Quite frankly, I think we
> are all still pretty surprised.
>
> I don't particularly like "Revised", it sounds too opportunistic. Besides,
> to make the title fit in that area we would be allowed a 4 letter word. How
> about changing the text and keeping the "Bold"
>
> Present Text:
>
> Help fund the initial budget of our new Foundation. All donations will be
> used to launch a viable enterprise. Visit our website to see your donated
> money at work.
>
> New text:
>
> We all came together with amazing support for the Foundation. Let us now
> take up this additional challenge to help fund the initial budget of our new
> Foundation. All donations will be used to launch a viable and competitive
> enterprise product. Visit our website to see your donated money at work.
>
> How does this sound? We are still affirming the SC documentation/
> announcement on the Challenge site. The text fits in the box at 10pt and
> with sitting it under the title. Still looks very presentable.
>
> We are just running out of space for text, not to mention that the days left
> in the campaign are running out for this flyer to be effective for anyone.
>
>
>>
>> documentfoundation.org needs to change "Help us funding the Foundation!"
>
> Yes. I think this is where we come in. We are the people who should be
> offering up some suggestions. I have already mentioned about the wording of
> this to someone on some list a while ago.
>
>>
>> Let's go! People want to join in. They want to contribute. The poster
>> and all other words (LibO&  TDF websites) should give people good
>> reasons to do what they want to do. I would also add something for
>> organizations that are getting (or could get) real value from
>> LibreOffice.
>>
>> Carl
>>
>
> Cheers
>
> Marc
>
>


I think that your suggestions make sense. There are several different
objectives that need to be balanced. Thank you for doing that.

Carl

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