On Wed, 2011-05-04 at 08:19 -0400, webmaster for Kracked Press Productions wrote: > On 05/04/2011 05:52 AM, Marc Paré wrote:
<snip> > > > > Sorry for getting on this and commenting a little late on insert. not late. > > > > * on the globe. Please remove the "e" from "Française", it should read > > "Français" Done. > > > > * as this is an insert, p.1 (Contact Us panel), there are many > > weblinks without properly written URL. The URL's need to be written > > out. Example: Facebook section "a group", "fan page" need to be > > replaced by their respective URL's. right - as I said 'copied right from website, few edits made yet' > > > > * p. 1, section: Why are we calling yourselves "The Document > > Foundation" -- I would suggest either modifying "For ten years" to > > "For over ten years" or "In the past". Otherwise, the word "ten" will > > have to be modified to "eleven" next year and "twelve" the next year > > etc. We can make this affirmation less based on a number of years to > > avoid having to update the insert on a yearly basis. > > > > * p. 1, section: "Why are calling the software "LibreOffice" instead > > of "OpenOffice.org?" I think the answer is now out-dated. I think the > > official line is that the LibreOffice name is here to stay and > > OpenOffice.org is no longer a consideration. We had hope to get and > > use the OpenOffice.org name. Anyway, this needs to be updated. Italo > > could help with this, so that we get the official line on this answer. > > > > * p. 1, section: "Why are you building a new web infrastructure?" The > > answer needs to be redone and the word "today" removed. > > > > * p. 1, section: "What does this announcement mean to other derivative > > of OpenOffice.org? The answer section: "We are delighted" needs > > updating from "will be merged" to "have been merged". > > > > * p. 2, second panel, links URL should be typed in (similar to the p. > > 1, 1st panel) > > > > * p. 3, second panel. There is spacing problems for the "For certain > > features of ... for Base." Not sure but it looks like you should > > remove and empty line. > > > > Note: sorry, if I missed this, but where is this insert going? > > <snip> > > > The original need was to have some insert for the inside of the DVD. > Think Movie DVD insert that hold info on the DVD you just bought. > > This insert was to do the following: > 1] Tell people how to use this DVD > 2] Tell what is on the DVD > 3] Give info on system resources needed > 4] Give more info about LibreOffice and the NA project. > > That is how I pictured it. Good overview, IMO. @Tim - to touch on your last email about 'info of what's on the disc', if you recall I sent a first idea a while back, with just that info, folks asked for I thought more with what I had in this second - but yes it needs both, so instead of subtracting yet, I added - right now 9 1/2 panels (each panel has to to shrink still also...joy) I didn't put this longer version to to the server yet - I'll try to pull some out (perhaps the whole FAQ section and most of the first panel) - then do so. Unless you want the long version now..(let me know) > > The actual size has to be able to fit into the DVD case so the height > cannot be larger than 7 inches. Right - and the layout right now is 11 inches to the paper edge. So it is looking like we need to some choices pretty quick - Maybe 6 panels is not going to work, even for the tall (larger) case. We can move to two up page layout, which means a staple charge, but then we can have 4, 8 or 12 pages. Thoughts on that? Thanks Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
