On Sun, 2011-05-15 at 19:33 -0700, C. Olofson wrote: > On 05/15/2011 06:44 PM, drew wrote: > > On Sun, 2011-05-15 at 21:11 -0400, drew wrote: > >> Hi, > >> > >> Uploaded, to the wiki, the updated Tri-Fold brochure > >> > >> > >> http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/1/14/LibO-TriFild-Pamphlet-11-05-15-ltr-en.pdf > >> > >> Comments, more suggestions welcomed. > > and - forgot to mention this here (did on the mktg list) > > > > For BSD what I did was to add a secondary line for platforms on the > > interior listing. (1st column page 2) > > > > For the front panel I stayed with the three platforms listed on the > > download page at libo/tdf sites. > > > > Does that seem reasonable? > I would say that consistency trumps platforms, for now. Consider > removing the *BSD reference until it's reflected community-wide. All of > this is highly subjective and, I can't see this as a major thing but, > KISS (keep it simple silly). Stick to the three predominate platforms > in all of our literature until we've built a bigger community consensus > on this.
Alright - Marc brings up the same point also, so updated the file at http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/1/14/LibO-TriFild-Pamphlet-11-05-15-ltr-en.pdf Removed that second line for platforms for now. > > By the way, I appreciate the 'GNU' in 'GNU/Linux'. ;-) > > As far as the rest; on the center column, internal page: > > There are no license fees, and thus no > > administrative burden is necessary. > > Install LibreOffice as often and > > wherever you want. > > You should look at re-writing this to fit the rest in the list: start > the sentence with 'LibreOffice' (and look at bolding all instance of > LibreOffice maybe). Did go ahead and do the bold - did not re-write the copy, yet, but yes I think you are right and it could use some changes. (next turn on the wheel for that) If anyone wants to offer a change to a particular paragraph(s) please do. The working file with this mornings changes can be found here: http://lo-portal.us/temp/LibOPamphlet-may-17.odt Thanks Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
