Thank u sir Harsha S Mysuru
Sent from my iPhone On 17-Nov-2016, at 11:57 AM, 'praveen ro' via Maths & Science STF <[email protected]> wrote: Hello team, I am Praveen S from Kolar. I saw your book. I would like to give these feedback: 1. the figure on the cover page is irrelevent, rather consider some optical image 2. the very first paragraph has grammar mistakes. Consider the first paragraph like this: ಬೆಳಕು ಅಥವಾ ಜ್ಯೋತಿ ಎಂಬ ಪದ ಕಿವಿಗೆ ಬೀಳುತ್ತಲೇ ಮನಸ್ಸಿನಲ್ಲಿ ಒಂದು ಧನಾತ್ಮಕ ಭಾವನೆಯುಂಟಾಗುತ್ತದೆ. ಎಲ್ಲಾ ಧರ್ಮದವರೂ ಬೆಳಕಕನ್ನು ದೇವರಂತೆ ಕಾಣುತ್ತಾರೆ. ಇದರಲ್ಲಿ ಯಾವುದೇ ಆಶರ್ಯವಿಲ್ಲ. ಏಕೆಂದರೆ ಬೆಳಕಿಲ್ಲದ ಈ ನಮ್ಮ ಜಗತ್ತನ್ನು ನಾವು ಊಹಿಸಲೂ ಕಷ್ಟವಾಗುತ್ತದೆ. ಅಲ್ಲದೆ, ಬೆಳಕಿರುವುದರಿಂದಲೇ ನಮಗೆ ಈ ಜಗತ್ತು ಇಷ್ಟೊಂದು ಅದ್ಭುತವಾಗಿ ಮತ್ತು ವರ್ಣಮಯವಾಗಿ ಕಾಣುತ್ತಿರುವುದು. 3) No activities have been listed. 4) No extra information apart from the text matter. 5) Few conceptual errors like: <blob.jpg> <blob.jpg> 6) No sources are mentioned for any diagram. Please try to introduce a) activities for light chapter b)novel teaching ideas in teaching optics these are my personal views please don't think otherwise. Good luck for the team. Praveen S Kolar -- 1. If a teacher wants to join STF, visit http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Become_a_STF_groups_member 2. For STF training, visit KOER - http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php 4. For Ubuntu 14.04 installation, visit http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Kalpavriksha 4. For doubts on Ubuntu, public software, visit http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Frequently_Asked_Questions 5. Are you using pirated software? Use Sarvajanika Tantramsha, see http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Why_public_software ಸಾರ್ವಜನಿಕ ಇಲಾಖೆಗೆ ಸಾರ್ವಜನಿಕ ತಂತ್ರಾಂಶ --- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Maths & Science STF" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at https://groups.google.com/group/mathssciencestf. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout. <blob.jpg> <blob.jpg> <blob.jpg> -- 1. If a teacher wants to join STF, visit http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Become_a_STF_groups_member 2. For STF training, visit KOER - http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php 4. For Ubuntu 14.04 installation, visit http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Kalpavriksha 4. For doubts on Ubuntu, public software, visit http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Frequently_Asked_Questions 5. Are you using pirated software? Use Sarvajanika Tantramsha, see http://karnatakaeducation.org.in/KOER/en/index.php/Why_public_software ಸಾರ್ವಜನಿಕ ಇಲಾಖೆಗೆ ಸಾರ್ವಜನಿಕ ತಂತ್ರಾಂಶ --- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Maths & Science STF" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send an email to [email protected]. Visit this group at https://groups.google.com/group/mathssciencestf. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
