Which diagram sir
Pls tell us to make it correct

Harsha S
Mysuru

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On 17-Nov-2016, at 1:04 PM, Shashikant Baraker <[email protected]> wrote:

Nice observation sir, some diagrams need corrections.... I suggest the team to 
revise it again

> On Nov 17, 2016 11:57 AM, "'praveen ro' via Maths & Science STF" 
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hello team,
> I am Praveen S from Kolar.
> I saw your book.
> I would like to give these feedback:
> 1. the figure on the cover page is irrelevent, rather consider some optical 
> image
> 2. the very first paragraph has grammar mistakes. Consider the first 
> paragraph like this:
> ಬೆಳಕು ಅಥವಾ ಜ್ಯೋತಿ ಎಂಬ ಪದ ಕಿವಿಗೆ ಬೀಳುತ್ತಲೇ ಮನಸ್ಸಿನಲ್ಲಿ ಒಂದು ಧನಾತ್ಮಕ 
> ಭಾವನೆಯುಂಟಾಗುತ್ತದೆ. ಎಲ್ಲಾ ಧರ್ಮದವರೂ ಬೆಳಕಕನ್ನು ದೇವರಂತೆ ಕಾಣುತ್ತಾರೆ. ಇದರಲ್ಲಿ 
> ಯಾವುದೇ ಆಶರ್ಯವಿಲ್ಲ. ಏಕೆಂದರೆ ಬೆಳಕಿಲ್ಲದ ಈ ನಮ್ಮ ಜಗತ್ತನ್ನು ನಾವು ಊಹಿಸಲೂ 
> ಕಷ್ಟವಾಗುತ್ತದೆ. ಅಲ್ಲದೆ, ಬೆಳಕಿರುವುದರಿಂದಲೇ ನಮಗೆ ಈ ಜಗತ್ತು ಇಷ್ಟೊಂದು ಅದ್ಭುತವಾಗಿ 
> ಮತ್ತು ವರ್ಣಮಯವಾಗಿ ಕಾಣುತ್ತಿರುವುದು.
> 3) No activities have been listed.
> 4) No extra information apart from the text matter.
> 5) Few conceptual errors like:
> <blob.jpg>
> <blob.jpg>
> <blob.jpg>
> 6) No sources are mentioned for any diagram.
> Please try to introduce
> a) activities for light chapter
> b)novel teaching ideas in teaching optics
> these are my personal views please don't think otherwise.
> Good luck for the team.
> 
>  
> Praveen S Kolar
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