Module: Mesa
Branch: master
Commit: b43daf7bf6cb505ece025c718ac6f074c38b2d49
URL:
http://cgit.freedesktop.org/mesa/mesa/commit/?id=b43daf7bf6cb505ece025c718ac6f074c38b2d49
Author: Ben Crocker <bcroc...@redhat.com>
Date: Mon Nov 27 14:44:59 2017 -0500
docs/llvmpipe.html: Minor edits
Language and spelling fixups in three places.
Cc: "17.2" "17.3" <mesa-sta...@lists.freedesktop.org>
Signed-off-by: Ben Crocker <bcroc...@redhat.com>
Reviewed-by: Eric Engestrom <eric.engest...@imgtec.com>
[Eric: move two fixes from the other patch to this one.]
Signed-off-by: Eric Engestrom <eric.engest...@imgtec.com>
---
docs/llvmpipe.html | 14 +++++++-------
1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/llvmpipe.html b/docs/llvmpipe.html
index 12dccb5eae..5468736b72 100644
--- a/docs/llvmpipe.html
+++ b/docs/llvmpipe.html
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@ It's the fastest software rasterizer for Mesa.
<ul>
<li>
- <p>An x86 or amd64 processor; 64-bit mode recommended.</p>
+ <p>For x86 or amd64 processors, 64-bit mode is recommended.</p>
<p>
Support for SSE2 is strongly encouraged. Support for SSE3 and SSE4.1 will
yield the most efficient code. The fewer features the CPU has the more
- likely is that you run into underperforming, buggy, or incomplete code.
+ likely it is that you will run into underperforming, buggy, or incomplete
code.
</p>
<p>
See /proc/cpuinfo to know what your CPU supports.
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ It's the fastest software rasterizer for Mesa.
aptitude install llvm-dev
</pre>
<p>
- If you want development snaptshot builds of LLVM for Debian and derived
+ If you want development snapshot builds of LLVM for Debian and derived
distributions like Ubuntu, you can use the APT repository at <a
href="https://apt.llvm.org/"; title="Debian Development packages for LLVM"
>apt.llvm.org</a>, which are maintained by Debian's LLVM maintainer.
@@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ build/linux-???-debug/gallium/drivers/llvmpipe:
</ul>
<p>
-Some of this tests can output results and benchmarks to a tab-separated-file
-for posterior analysis, e.g.:
+Some of these tests can output results and benchmarks to a tab-separated file
+for later analysis, e.g.:
</p>
<pre>
build/linux-x86_64-debug/gallium/drivers/llvmpipe/lp_test_blend -o blend.tsv
@@ -246,8 +246,8 @@ for posterior analysis, e.g.:
<ul>
<li>
- When looking to this code by the first time start in lp_state_fs.c, and
- then skim through the lp_bld_* functions called in there, and the comments
+ When looking at this code for the first time, start in lp_state_fs.c, and
+ then skim through the lp_bld_* functions called there, and the comments
at the top of the lp_bld_*.c functions.
</li>
<li>
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