Looks good here. It has a number now! :-) Neil
On 4/21/2010 9:56 AM, Anthony Bryan wrote: > we are close! > > please check the diff, changes are very minor. we need to check out > the MIME type registration too. > > RFC AUTHOR(S): > -------------- > > This is your LAST CHANCE to make changes to your RFC to be: > draft-bryan-metalink-28.txt, once the document is published as > an RFC we *WILL NOT* make any changes. > > Please check your document at: > > http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc5854.txt > > For your convenience, a diff file that compares the original > Internet-Draft and the RFC is posted here: > > http://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc5854-diff.html > > > > ---------- Forwarded message ---------- > From: <[email protected]> > Date: Mon, Apr 19, 2010 at 7:40 PM > Subject: Re: AUTH48 [MF]: RFC 5854 <draft-bryan-metalink-28.txt> NOW AVAILABLE > To: [email protected], [email protected], [email protected], > [email protected] > Cc: [email protected], Lisa Dusseault > <[email protected]>, Peter Saint-Andre <[email protected]> > > > > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that after you have approved the document, > post-xml2rfc changes will be made to update the header and > boilerplate as described in RFC 5741. > --> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] A. Bryan, would you like to add an organization here? > Or be listed as "Consultant"? Just checking - although we note that your > answer was "No" regarding RFC 5843. --> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] T. Tsujikawa, would you like to add an organization here? > Or be listed as "Consultant"? --> > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] N. McNab, would you like to add an organization here? Or > be listed as "Consultant"? --> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the title) for use on http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfcsearch.html. --> > > > 6) <!--[rfced] Please rephrase to make the sentence above more clear. > > Original: > Every URI [RFC3986] is also > an IRI, so a URI may be used wherever below an IRI is named. > > Suggested: > Every URI [RFC3986] is also > an IRI, so a URI may be used wherever an IRI is named below. > --> > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] In the ABNF below, in the rule for separators, > should <"> be changed to DQUOTE ? > > This note is from Bill's ABNF parser > (http://tools.ietf.org/tools/bap/abnf.cgi) > > fyi: suggest DQUOTE or %x22 instead of <">. > --> > > token = 1*<any CHAR except CTLs or separators> > separators = "(" / ")" / "<" / ">" / "@" > / "," / ";" / ":" / "" / <"> > / "/" / "[" / "]" / "?" / "=" > / "{" / "}" / SP / HTAB > agent = token ["/" agent-version] > agent-version = token > > > 8) > This specification describes Metalink's XML markup vocabulary. > > <!--[rfced] Is "XML markup" redundant? That is, could this be changed > to "Metalink's XML vocabulary"? --> > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/ah > > > On Apr 19, 2010, at 7:38 PM, [email protected] wrote: > > > *****IMPORTANT***** > > Updated 2010/04/19 > > *NOTE* -- Change in Copyright Notice and Legends > for IETF and IAB Stream Documents > > With the publication of BCP 78 / RFC 5378, the copyright notice and > legends changed as of 10 November 2008. A revision to the "Legal > Provisions Relating to IETF Documents", effective 15 February > 2009, contains optional text in Section 6.c.iii to address the issue > of pre-RFC 5378 material. Please review RFC 5378 and the text > located at http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/. > > The RFC 5378 copyright notice and legends are being applied to your > document in one of the following ways: > > 1. 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You > should therefore proofread the entire RFC carefully and without > assumptions. > > Please reply, as this document will not be published until we receive > agreement from ALL listed authors that the document is ready for > publication. > > Thank you for your cooperation, > > RFC Editor > > -------------------------------------- > RFC5854 (draft-bryan-metalink-28) > -------------------------------------- > Title : The Metalink Download Description Format > Author(s) : A. Bryan, T. Tsujikawa, N. McNab, P. Poeml > WG Chair(s) : > IESG Contact : L. Dusseault, P. Saint-Andre > > > > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Metalink Discussion" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected]. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/metalink-discussion?hl=en.
