Stuart Henderson <s...@spacehopper.org> writes:

> On 2015-09-11, Rob Pierce <r...@2keys.ca> wrote:
>> Agreed about the word order. How about this?
>> 
>> Index: ftp.html
>>===================================================================
>> RCS file: /cvs/www/ftp.html,v
>> retrieving revision 1.673
>> diff -u -p -r1.673 ftp.html
>> --- ftp.html 25 Jul 2015 19:24:18 -0000      1.673
>> +++ ftp.html 11 Sep 2015 12:30:18 -0000
>> @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ upgrade your system very quickly.
>> <h3><font color="#0000e0"><a name=mirrors>Download via
>>    HTTP/FTP</a></font></h3>
>>  
>> -OpenBSD can be also easily installed via HTTP or FTP.
>> +OpenBSD can also be easily obtained via HTTP or FTP.
>>  Typically you need a single small piece of boot media (e.g., a boot floppy)

Boot floppy, really? :)

>>  and then the rest of the files can be installed from a number of locations,
>>  including directly off the Internet.
>>
>>
>
> I would just drop the word 'easily' here.

+1

> Also, see the line at the top of the file, you are patching the wrong file.
>


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