Feel free to reject the below without comment if these changes are not
deemed improvements:

--- faq4.html.orig    2015-12-20 21:56:34.565914000 +0100
+++ faq4.html    2015-12-21 23:33:22.311786584 +0100
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
 <h2 id="Overview">4.1 - Overview of the OpenBSD installation procedure</h2>

 <p>
-OpenBSD has long been respected for its simple and straight forward
+OpenBSD has long been respected for its simple and straightforward
 installation process, which is very consistent across all platforms.

 <p>
@@ -131,8 +131,8 @@
 boot</a>).

 <li><b>Writing a file system image to disk (miniroot):</b>
-Typically, these are written to a USB device to boot up the install
-kernel.
+Here, either <tt>installXX.fs</tt> or <tt>minirootXX.fs</tt> is written
+to&mdash;typically&mdash;a USB device to boot up the install kernel.

 </ul>

@@ -666,9 +666,10 @@
 common passwords people think are really clever.

 <p>
-You will later be given a chance to create an administrative account and
-disable remote (SSH) access to the root account, but you still want a
-good password on your root account.
+You will later be given a chance to create an administrative account.
+If you create one, you will be asked&mdash;and the default will
be&mdash;to
+disable remote (SSH) access to the root account, but regardless of your
+choices, you still want a good password on your root account.

 <p>
 <table border=0 width="90%"><tr><td nowrap bgcolor="#EEEEEE"><pre>
@@ -1626,7 +1627,7 @@

 <p>
 All partitions which have native FFS partitions on them should be within
-the OpenBSD fdisk(8) partition, however
+their drive's OpenBSD fdisk(8) partition, however
 <a href="faq14.html#foreignfs">non-OpenBSD</a> partitions can (and
 usually should) be outside the OpenBSD fdisk partition.

@@ -1635,8 +1636,8 @@
 <a href="faq14.html#disklabel">here</a>.

 <p>
-More information on why partitioning is beneficial and strategy for
-creating a good partitioning plan are <a href="#Partitioning">below</a>.
+More information on why partitioning is beneficial and a strategy for
+creating a good partitioning plan is found <a
href="#Partitioning">below</a>.

 <p>
 The OpenBSD installer will attempt to auto-partition your

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