Some punctuation, case and grammer corrections along with a few hrefs.
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@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ to 5.9.
driver now supports sector mode for eMMC devices, such as those found
on
some BeagleBone Black boards.
<li>The <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=cnmac";>cnmac(4)</a>
- driver now supports checksum offloading
+ driver now supports checksum offloading.
<li>The <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ipmi";>ipmi(4)</a>
driver now supports OpenIPMI compatible character device.
<li>...
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ to 5.9.
</ul>
<li>Userland programs were audited so that they could be properly annotated
with pledge(2).
- This resulted in design changes such as
+ This resulted in design changes such as:
<ul>
<li>
addition of
@@ -206,17 +206,17 @@ to 5.9.
<li>SMP network stack improvements:
<ul>
- <li>The task processing incoming packets can now runs mostly in parallel
+ <li>The task processing incoming packets can now run mostly in parallel
of the rest of the kernel, this include:
<ul>
<li><a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=carp";>carp(4)</a>,
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=trunk";>trunk(4)</a>,
<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=vlan";>vlan(4)</a>
and other pseudo-driver with the exception of
- <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bridge";>bridge(4)</a>
- <li>Ethernet decapsulation, ARP processing and MPLS forwarding path
+ <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bridge";>bridge(4)</a>.
+ <li>Ethernet decapsulation, ARP processing and MPLS forwarding path.
<li><a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bpf";>bpf(4)</a>
- filter matching
+ filter matching.
</ul>
<li>The Rx and Tx rings of the
<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ix";>ix(4)</a>,
@@ -228,10 +228,10 @@ to 5.9.
<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=gem";>gem(4)</a>,
<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=re";>re(4)</a> and
<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=cas";>cas(4)</a>
- drivers can now be processed in parallel of the rest of the kernel
+ drivers can now be processed in parallel of the rest of the kernel.
<li>The Rx ring of the
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=cnmac";>cnmac(4)</a>
- driver can now be processed in parallel of the rest of the kernel
+ driver can now be processed in parallel of the rest of the kernel.
</ul>
<p>
@@ -401,13 +401,20 @@ to 5.9.
and reduce dynamic linking overhead.
<li>Handle intra-thread kills via new
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=thrkill";>thrkill(2)</a>
- system call to tighten pledge(2) restrictions and improve
pthread_kill(3)
- and pthread_cancel(3) compliance.
+ system call to tighten
+ <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pledge";>pledge(2)</a>.
+ restrictions and improve
+ <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pthread_kill";>pthread_kill(3)</a>
+ and
+ <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pthread_cancel";>pthread_cancel(3)</a>
+ compliance.
<li>Added <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=getpwnam_shadow";>
getpwnam_shadow(3)</a>
and <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=getpwuid_shadow";>
getpwuid_shadow(3)</a>
- to permit tighter pledge(2) restrictions.
+ to permit tighter
+ <a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pledge";>pledge(2)</a>.
+ restrictions.
<li>Added support to
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ktrace";>ktrace(1)</a>
the arguments to
@@ -525,7 +532,7 @@ to 5.9.
based on <tt>draft-rsa-dsa-sha2-256-03.txt</tt> and
<tt>draft-ssh-ext-info-04.txt</tt>.
<li><a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ssh";>ssh(1)</a>:
- Add an <tt>AddKeysToAgent</tt> client option which can be set to
+ add an <tt>AddKeysToAgent</tt> client option which can be set to
<tt>yes</tt>, <tt>no</tt>, <tt>ask</tt>, or <tt>confirm</tt>, and
defaults to <tt>no</tt>. When enabled, a private key that is used
during authentication will be added to
@@ -578,7 +585,7 @@ to 5.9.
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=sshd";>sshd(8)</a>:
refine compatibility workarounds for WinSCP.
<li>Fix a number of memory faults (double-free, free of uninitialised
- memory, etc) in
+ memory, etc.) in
<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ssh";>ssh(1)</a>
and
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ssh-keygen";>ssh-keygen(1)</a>.
@@ -676,7 +683,7 @@ to 5.9.
<a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=sshd";>sshd(8)</a>:
fix some option parsing memory leaks. (bz#2182)
<li><a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ssh";>ssh(1)</a>:
- add a some debug output before DNS resolution; it's a place where
+ add some debug output before DNS resolution; it's a place where
ssh could previously silently stall in cases of unresponsive DNS
servers. (bz#2433)
<li><a
href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ssh";>ssh(1)</a>:
@@ -733,7 +740,7 @@ to 5.9.
format.
<li>Added <tt>COMODO RSA Certification Authority</tt> and
<tt>QuoVadis</tt> root certificates to <tt>cert.pem</tt>.
- <li>Removed Remhve "<tt>C=US, O=VeriSign, Inc., OU=Class 3 Public Primary
+ <li>Removed "<tt>C=US, O=VeriSign, Inc., OU=Class 3 Public Primary
Certification Authority</tt>"
(serial 3c:91:31:cb:1f:f6:d0:1b:0e:9a:b8:d0:44:bf:12:be)
root certificate from <tt>cert.pem</tt>.
