Oh. Wow.
That story gave me an irrepresible fit of the giggles. The protagonists who
just sort of blindly bumble from one adventure to another always bring warm
fuzzy squeals. Seriously, I loved this.
There were parts where it seemed there could have been more exposition or
interaction between the characters, and instead the plot just seems to
dutifully head from point A to B, so it feels like there were some missed
opporitunities for some characterization that I would have been exited to see.
But even as it was I loved this story and you absolutely HAVE to expound upon
this. Expound! I commandeth thee! :)
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