Oh.  Wow.  

 

That story gave me an irrepresible fit of the giggles.  The protagonists who 
just sort of blindly bumble from one adventure to another always bring warm 
fuzzy squeals.  Seriously, I loved this.

 

There were parts where it seemed there could have been more exposition or 
interaction between the characters, and instead the plot just seems to 
dutifully head from point A to B, so it feels like there were some missed 
opporitunities for some characterization that I would have been exited to see.  
But even as it was I loved this story and you absolutely HAVE to expound upon 
this.  Expound!  I commandeth thee! :)
                                          

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