A very powerful piece Ryx. I recall having recently seen something in
the archives about this fellow and mention of the bear with the
Canticles as I did some research. It was good to hear how the bear was
freed (or hopefully so in a later tale).
The only thing I saw was a couple places where 'the' or other such
connectors were left out. Otherwise it seemed a well crafted tale.
Kamau
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