An interesting first entry into the MK story universe. The structure
was somewhat different from most stories I've seen here but considering
what you were trying to do I think it worked. Just a bit jarring for
the reader is all.
It will be interesting to see what happens as they come to the Keep and
adapt to it.
Good luck with future stories.
Kamau
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