I'm going to change the ending of Malakai and Sargosa when I get a moment, I've been a little sore for a bit as in addition to these four, I write a FreeRIDE story and wore myself from the long day. As a result the ending of Malakai & Sargosa is admittedly, lazy, lackluster, and rushed. Still looking for feedback on these tales btw, especially The Inescapable Cult as I fear it jumps the shark a few times and The Study Of Women as I could see how it would be controversial
Thank you - HawlSera On Thu, Oct 16, 2014 at 8:00 AM, <[email protected]> wrote: > Send MKGuild mailing list submissions to > [email protected] > > To subscribe or unsubscribe via the World Wide Web, visit > http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/mkguild > or, via email, send a message with subject or body 'help' to > [email protected] > > You can reach the person managing the list at > [email protected] > > When replying, please edit your Subject line so it is more specific > than "Re: Contents of MKGuild digest..." > > > Today's Topics: > > 1. My most productive writing day ever ([email protected]) > 2. Re: My most productive writing day ever (christian okane) > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Message: 1 > Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2014 17:15:04 -0400 > From: <[email protected]> > To: [email protected] > Subject: [Mkguild] My most productive writing day ever > Message-ID: > < > cagvz7xn2urojyzwjnw3vzkw2enoc91rjpfnqfbpw0zgspde...@mail.gmail.com> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" > > I have not written one Metamor Keep story. No... I WROTE FOUR! > > Note this is not the conclusion to tales of the Transblade, let's just say > it's the end of the prologue. > > Yes I realize I'm really jumping the shark with the flesinoir and some of > the darker and more strange content. But still enjoy, let me know what you > think > > I am now listing these in chronological order > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJbziuy6slFG2_buujGTryTofQt-oPvcGU2zBJHqqT0/edit?usp=sharing > - The Study Of Women for anyone who wanted a follow up to Between Us Girls. > It's short, to the point, and very cheesey. > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2Rr5nPwKV-ZR7FOLmbmAaVmLZ5DrQsP5O6OVYCu3AE/edit?usp=sharing > - Flesinoir Truths - Yeah those Flesinoir I've been talking about their > strange beliefs about flesh, want to meet them? Also Horses and Transgender > Women galore! > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mblqIRN4cJqEeG3iptJhEgZcRHeMxk1BhLQCWnU_1C0/edit?usp=sharing > - The Inescapable Cult, one of my darkest and strangest stories. I don't > know how I feel about this one > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnmlVYXWFANvkiw6Lc_5cJMgumE0JxqkC_64lvFodrE/edit?usp=sharing > - Malaki and Sargosa - How do you know you've written your characters into > an unwinnable situation and need to pull a resolution out of your butt. You > write Malakai and Sargosa > > > This has basically never happened from me before. Four new Metamor Tales > all at once! > > I also wrote one FreeRIDE story while writing these four and I'll put that > on the Shifit when I'm not so tired. > > Feed back is definitely requested... especially for "The Inescapable Cult", > that one's a little.. freaky deaky. > -------------- next part -------------- > An HTML attachment was scrubbed... > URL: < > http://lists.integral.org/archives/mkguild/attachments/20141015/7889c302/attachment-0001.html > > > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 2 > Date: Thu, 16 Oct 2014 02:28:20 -0400 > From: christian okane <[email protected]> > To: [email protected], [email protected] > Subject: Re: [Mkguild] My most productive writing day ever > Message-ID: <003e01cfe90a$61426640$23c732c0$@net> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" > > Four? > > Wow! You have been busy! > > > > > > Chris > > The Lurking Fox > > > > From: [email protected] [mailto: > [email protected]] On Behalf Of [email protected] > Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2014 5:15 PM > To: [email protected] > Subject: [Mkguild] My most productive writing day ever > > > > I have not written one Metamor Keep story. No... I WROTE FOUR! > > Note this is not the conclusion to tales of the Transblade, let's just say > it's the end of the prologue. > > Yes I realize I'm really jumping the shark with the flesinoir and some of > the darker and more strange content. But still enjoy, let me know what you > think > > I am now listing these in chronological order > > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJbziuy6slFG2_buujGTryTofQt-oPvcGU2zBJHqqT0/edit?usp=sharing > - The Study Of Women for anyone who wanted a follow up to Between Us Girls. > It's short, to the point, and very cheesey. > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2Rr5nPwKV-ZR7FOLmbmAaVmLZ5DrQsP5O6OVYCu3AE/edit?usp=sharing > - Flesinoir Truths - Yeah those Flesinoir I've been talking about their > strange beliefs about flesh, want to meet them? Also Horses and Transgender > Women galore! > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mblqIRN4cJqEeG3iptJhEgZcRHeMxk1BhLQCWnU_1C0/edit?usp=sharing > - The Inescapable Cult, one of my darkest and strangest stories. I don't > know how I feel about this one > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TnmlVYXWFANvkiw6Lc_5cJMgumE0JxqkC_64lvFodrE/edit?usp=sharing > - Malaki and Sargosa - How do you know you've written your characters into > an unwinnable situation and need to pull a resolution out of your butt. You > write Malakai and Sargosa > > > > This has basically never happened from me before. Four new Metamor Tales > all at once! > > I also wrote one FreeRIDE story while writing these four and I'll put that > on the Shifit when I'm not so tired. > > Feed back is definitely requested... especially for "The Inescapable > Cult", that one's a little.. freaky deaky. > > -------------- next part -------------- > An HTML attachment was scrubbed... > URL: < > http://lists.integral.org/archives/mkguild/attachments/20141016/b3485347/attachment-0001.html > > > > ------------------------------ > > _______________________________________________ > MKGuild mailing list > [email protected] > http://lists.integral.org/listinfo/mkguild > > > End of MKGuild Digest, Vol 91, Issue 15 > *************************************** >
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