Sounds ok to me. The scene as described sounds like the characters are spread out across the banner. A good use of space. All of them are doing something that’re believable in the setting.
For me the things that I wonder about are minor details: What clothes are they wearing? (something casual? evening wear?) Their level of inebriation (scaling from: sober, loose, volunteering for karaoke, dancing to music that isn’t playing, comatose, beyond reviving) What instruments are used for the duet? And maybe some useless details like an abandoned game of cards littering the table with one or some of the players having aces falling from their sleeves as they pull/resist getting pulled from their seats. In short: I agree with this scene From: christian okane Sent: Thursday, May 14, 2015 6:56 PM To: 'christian okane' ; 'C. Matthias' ; 'Ryx' ; 'Alex Green' Cc: [email protected] Subject: Re: [Mkguild] Next MK Group Picture I like that idea for a scene. So do we all agree on this scene: Malger and Misanthe are playing a duet, Caroline and Kayla are trying to drag Misha and Rickkter away from their table and their mazers of frothing ale so that they can dance to the music. Donny is bringing the next round of ales for all to enjoy.
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