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Chris




        Standing outside the gates of Komley, William Pernese shaded his 
cinnamon colored eyes from a late March sun. The day was calm, making the sun 
feel a little bit hotter, and even at this early time in the morning one could 
feel that it would be a beautiful day. It's too bad the eighteen year old man 
could not enjoy it.
 
 
        In fact he was feeling almost mutinous, seeing as he had been forced to 
join this trading mission his cousin cooked up. His parents idea, of course, to 
make him stop trying to join the military. His one dream, to fight amazing 
battles among his brothers-in-arms, like Captain Kaltro in the town guard. His 
parents, though, wanted him to become a glassblower.
 
 
>>> A glassblower is not exactly exciting.
 
 
        Tradition, how he hated that word, for the second son to uphold his 
father's honor and become an apprentice. It didn't matter how much pride his 
father showed when William proved to have a knack for shaping glass, it was 
what he'd wanted after all, it didn't matter how William felt.
 
 
        Looking moodily at his leather-clad feet in the sandy brown dirt, 
William's sullen thoughts were interrupted by his cousin's loud voice.
 
 
        “We begin, gentlemen!” Betan proclaimed, spreading his arms in a grand 
gesture William found over dramatic. “After planning this trip for three months 
the time has come to make a small journey for big profit! In just under five 
days we will be in the cursed valley of the demon-beasts.” He took a pause to 
meet the gazes of them all, William last, “But fret not, we will only stay long 
enough to make a bargain. After that we will all be richer men.”
 
 
>>>Not exactly subtle :)
 
 
         William snorted quietly. A soldier didn't need riches, he needed a 
blade, good boots, and a strong arm. Patting his new iron knife, the young man 
felt just a little better...And it really was going to be a beautiful day.
 
 
        A large man, the largest in the group at a full head above William, 
spoke up at this point with a heavy accent. “Mister Pernese, what of this 
curse? I have heard it turns grown men into children, warriors into mad fanged 
demons, and goodly women into succubi.”
 
 
        Betan shook his head, “The curse transforms people, but my father 
assures me that as long as we don't stay inside the valley too long we will be 
fine. The people there are godless monsters, but they still need goods and 
trade to survive. Apparently they can still reason like people.”
 
 
        “What about pay?” This from a pale thin man in dark clothing and a 
hooded cloak to William's left. He was standing away from the rest of the group 
a little, he made the others uncomfortable.
 
 
        His cousin smiled, though it was clear he wasn't very happy with the 
dark man's company, “I have given you a stipend for supplies. As I said, once 
the journey is complete you will receive payment in full...plus any expenses 
for a celebration when we return.”
 
 
        The dark man only nodded, William stared at him until his black eyes 
raised, and William looked away. The stranger made him uncomfortable.
 
 
        “Anything else? No?” With this Betan gestured to their guide, a short 
fat man with a small dark goatee, who bowed briefly and scooped up his travel 
pack. He started away, Betan close behind with a spring to his step, the rest 
filing behind. 
 
 
        William scooped up his own pack with his right hand and grasped the 
pack mule's lead with his left. Trailing in the back of the group, he watched 
the swish of the dark strangers cloak as he walked, thinking forlornly of his 
room in Sorin and its lovely sea breezes.
 
 
        He hadn't wanted to come on this trip; it'd been his parent's 
last-ditch effort to prevent him from joining the militia. Ship him off with 
Cousin Betan on his first solo trading mission. Betan's father, Uncle Vince, 
had organized the trip and given them the idea. 
 
 
        So here he was trudging through the countryside with four strangers and 
his headstrong, overconfident, butt-head of a cousin on a boring trading run.
 
 
        At least the two mercenaries Betan had hired were interesting.
 
 
        The tall one's name was Dorian, thick as an old oak tree, but pleasant 
enough so far. He wore only a simple cloth vest and pants, no shoes, and a 
scary looking notched greatsword poked over his left shoulder under his pack. 
His long blond hair and beard were uncut, which give him a wild looking face, 
but his easy smile sort-of ruined the tough-guy he appeared to be at first.
 
 
>Nice description!
 
 
        Walking beside him was his half-brother, Haliard, who was a darker 
shorter mirror of Dorian. Though the man didn't look half as wild, with his 
hair pulled back into a braid and his face shaven, he looked every bit the 
soldier. He seemed a very observant man, only spoke when it seemed important, 
and otherwise was apparently a decent man.
 
 
        Then there was the dark man, known only to them as Cal, and he was 
asked by Uncle Vince to be Betan's bodyguard. He was a thin, pale man with a 
pockmarked face and shifty black eyes. He'd been the one who inspected the 
mercenaries before allowing Betan to hire them. He was unpleasant but necessary.
 
 
        The last man in the brown robes was a guide hired in Komley. William 
didn't know his name yet, as he was only hired that morning, but he belonged to 
a travelers guild who guided explorers as well as merchants to various areas of 
the country. He hadn't seemed happy to get the job, though it appeared that his 
guildmaster may have given him this assignment as a punishment.
 
 
        All of them had been given a choice to join this expedition, for 
whatever reason, except for William. Five days traveling with his cousin, three 
heavily armed strangers, and an overweight guide who clearly wished to have 
refused the position.
 
 
        With a long-suffering sigh, William pushed these thoughts from his 
mind. It was looking to be a long trip.
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                                                                
        *   *        *
 
 
 
 
 
 
        The last five days had passed far more pleasantly and quickly then 
William had first imagined. Cal had begun to scout ahead for the group and had 
come back twice to warn them of some danger. They had been forced to go around 
it, costing the party almost a day's travel time. He rejoined them at night 
where everything was broken down and watches were chosen.
 
 
        Being the pack leader, a fancy way of saying “the guy who watches after 
the food and cares for the mule,” it was William's job to have last watch, 
mainly so that things were packed, quietly, before setting off that morning.
 
 
        Fortunately, the mercenaries were much more fun than it first appeared. 
After camp had been set up they would share stories of their adventures and the 
strange places they had visited. It had almost made the trip worth it for 
William, who Dorian had apparently taken a liking to, which also made a great 
deal of difference. 
 
 
        Haliard did not seem to care much about his brother's new friend, 
though the man would often interject to correct some of Dorian's wilder claims 
or stories. The blond warrior took this in stride, pretending to have forgotten 
or else admitting he'd been “trying to spice things up,” and never did they 
fight.
 
 
        Betan, on the other hand, was constantly having quiet arguments with 
Cal. Neither man seemed to have much like for the other, so when he wasn't 
arguing, Cal stayed cold and quiet. His cousin had always been stubborn, it 
wasn't a surprise to William that they had become lost somehow when Betan had 
put his foot down. As Tradesmaster he had the right to supersede the others, so 
they had been forced to go east around Midtown to avoid the crowds and market.
 
 
        None of the detours or the fights bothered the youngest man, who had to 
grudgingly admit he was having fun, but being lost so far from home was not 
sitting well with anyone.
 
 
        The goal was to approach a town called Jetta from the southeast, 
without passing through Midtown, and save a day from the trip. This did make 
some sense, though Cal argued hard for a stop in Midtown, and they continued on 
well into the night.
 
 
 
 
        Just after a stop for supper, with the sun already low on the horizon, 
they had spotted a sign warning them that the boundary of this valley's curse 
lay near. Discussing this briefly, the guide (who went by Samual) spoke up to 
let them know that Jetta is very close.
 
 
        They walked for about two hours, the sun had set by now, and a light 
fog had settled on them. With the torches lit they continued, met up with Cal, 
then came upon the edge of a forest. Within a few confused moments it was 
decided that they should stop for the night while Samual checked his maps.
 
 
        With the mule settled for the night, at the edge of the forest, William 
approached the brothers for the customary story. As per usual all six bedrolls 
were arranged in a protective circle around the packs. With the warm spring 
night a fire was both pointless as well as dangerous, so the brothers and Betan 
were sitting on their bedrolls, while Samual sat apart with a hooded lantern 
and poured over his maps. The only sounds in the creepy fog were Samual's 
muttering to himself.
 
 
        Cal stood a short distance away, gazing into the tree line, arms 
crossed and tense-looking.
 
 
        Dorian looked up as William approached; he smiled, though this time it 
didn't reach his eyes, “Hey buddy. Sorry, but there won't be any stories 
tonight.” He motioned towards the bedroll and William sat down. Shortly the 
three men were continuing a conversation they'd been having all evening: How 
had they gotten lost?
 
 
        The conversation was fairly repetitive, not to mention boring, and 
William's thoughts wandered aimlessly. Though this had been an interesting 
trip, he missed his bed at home, not to mention the salty air from the docks. 
Being lost now only made it worse and William realized how homesick he felt.
 
 
        Bittersweet thoughts of his family filled his mind. He missed them all, 
from his stern but loving mother, to his father's quite smiles, and even his 
stupid little brother being so serious all the time. He'd spent so much time 
dreaming of being a great soldier that he had never considered what it meant to 
leave home. It was this sobering reflection that he drifted off on, frowning 
slightly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                                                                
       *    *        *
 
 
 
 
 
 
        Soon enough something prodded William's side hard, Cal's cold voice 
hissed from somewhere above him, “Wake up you miserable piece of dung! Arm 
yourself and keep your eyes up.”
 
 
        William rolled over blearily, removed his hunting knife from the tangle 
of his bedroll, and stood up rubbing his eyes. He blinked at the sight before 
him.
 
 
        The fog had thickened so that the trees were barely perceptible; the 
mule looked like a shadow in the white mist. By its motion beside the tree to 
which it was tethered, and the small noise it made, the animal was clearly 
upset about something. 
 
 
        With the six of them standing around their gear with weapons drawn, 
William came fully awake with a trill of fear riding his spine. “What is it?” 
He whispered to Haliard on his left, watching the fog with wide eyes, “Bandits? 
Wolves?”
 
 
        Haliard shook his head, but Dorian answered quietly from the other 
side, “There was a strange noise just a moment ago...listen.”
 
 
        At first there wasn't anything to hear, then through the white cover 
came a noise none of them had ever heard before. It sounded like wood or bone 
being banged together, except it came very rapidly, a sound no human could hope 
to recreate. Right as the first one died, an answering clatter came from 
somewhere else, but direction was hard to figure through the blanket of fog.
 
 
        “What is that horrible noise?!” Samual asked, terror in his voice, “It 
gives me chills.”
 
 
        “...Chills?” Dorian spoke barely above a whisper, just before another 
staccato burst sounded, “Teeth...it's teeth banging together.”
 
 
        And it was, the mental image fit perfectly, but it didn't take away the 
eeriness of the sound that continued to increase in pitch and number around 
them. Time seemed to carry on slowly as the chattering quieted again, everyone 
shifted nervously about for what felt like hours, then they jumped as a loud 
scream split the air.
 
 
        “Look!” William pointed with his right hand at where he'd tied the 
mule. It was now thrashing on the ground as if fighting for it's life, except 
there wasn't anything to fight. They watched it, cringing slightly as it 
struggled, completely transfixed. After a few more seconds it made an awful 
noise and flopped into stillness, a dark lump on the ground.
 
 
        'Clack-clack-clack-clack-clack!'
 
 
 
>>> Oh this cannot be good!
 
 
        The noise came from behind them, making them all spin with a sharp 
intake of breath, but nothing appeared in the mist.
 
 
        “There!” Betan shouted, pointing off to the right and making them spin 
again.
 
 
        “What?” Dorian asked tensely
 
 
        “I saw a shadow, in the mist,” Betan replied in a choked voice. “It was 
some kind of animal, a big one.”
 
 
        Cal snorted, “It's the fog, makes things look bigger the they are. It's 
probably just a pack of wolves, or wild dogs.”
 
 
        “Wild canines don't make that noise,” Haliard stated calmly. He stood 
between Betan and William, each hand holding a curved sword.
 
 
        “What does?” William ventured, his knees shaking.
 
 
        “I don't know,” came the reply from Haliard. William didn't understand 
how he could stay so calm.
 
 
        “Daemons!” Samual squeaked, “Gods preserve this mortal coil, if I 
should die let my soul be lifted into etern-”
 
 
        “Shut up, you sniveling coward!” Cal spat, “No god wants to save your 
worthless hide.” He then sheathed his short sword to ready his hunting bow, 
notching an arrow.
 
 
         “Okay, whoever you are, come forth so I can kill you!” Cal snarled, “I 
want to see the whites of your eyes.”
 
 
        Silence reigned for several long seconds before the clacking started 
up, seemingly from all around them. Shadows began to materialize from the fog, 
a dozen shadows standing on four legs, each one was at least the size of a 
large dog. They began to growl menacingly between bursts of clacking, the 
largest of them stood opposite Cal, and they stopped right outside the group's 
ability to make out any other details.
 
 
        “I told you,” Cal muttered, “cursed dogs.” With this he drew back on 
his bowstring, sighted down the arrow, and let fly.
 
 
        William heard the 'twang' as the bowstring released, then almost 
immediately a meaty thud, followed by a shallow hissing noise. He turned in 
time to see the large shadow advance, to Cal's shock, and come within easy (not 
to mention uncomfortably close) sight.
 
 
        The thing was the size of a mountain cat, though it was shaped like a 
greyhound. That is where the nightmare began. It was pitch black from snout to 
tail with very little fur, the body was bony and it's pitch black skin looked 
oily. Where the bones weren't showing beneath its glossy skin it had well 
defined sinewy muscle bulging under the surface. Starting at the top of its 
head was a ridge of long stiff hair that stands up all the way to the base of 
it's tail, which was long, ropy, and thin. 
 
 
        Its face was the most horrible.
 
 
        It looked to be canine in shape but it was as if all the flesh had been 
burnt off, leaving a blackened skull showing through. There were no ears, just 
holes on the sides of its head, but two luminescent white eyes peered at them 
with cold hatred. The thing's maw had no lips, letting the row of sharp, 
yellowed, fangs be seen in all their terrible glory. Even as they watched, 
transfixed, it let out a low snarl and began clacking its teeth rapidly. An 
arrow protruded from the side of its throat dripping a thick black blood that 
seemed to smoke as it hit the air. 
 
 
        “Hellhounds,” Samual breathed, barely containing his fear.
 
 
        Terror seized William, he almost dropped his blade, he couldn't do this.
 
 
        “Not a hellhound,” Cal said, shaking his head without taking his eyes 
off of the monster.
 
 
        “What is it?” Dorian and Haliard asked in unison.
 
 
        “I don't know,” Cal returned through gritted teeth.
 
 
        Meanwhile, William's bowels felt like water, the young man was shaking 
so bad he bumped into Haliard. The mercenary caught his eye, nodding 
encouragement, and Dorian spoke from the other side, “steady there.”
 
 
        Dorian's voice brought back memories of the brief lessons William had 
learned about knife-fighting. Though he still felt unsteady he took a breath 
and shifted into a fighting stance, blade held defensively before him.
 
 
        “'atta boy.” The large warrior said without looking. 
 
 
        As if frustrated with the distraction, the beasts advanced, they 
tightened the ring so the companions had to stand almost shoulder-to shoulder. 
Just to the left of the largest one with the arrow in its neck, another one 
advanced further with a snarl, only to be snapped at by its brother. Then the 
large one made a noise that sounded horrifyingly close to:
 
 
        “Mine!”
 
 
        Samual let out a whimpering cry of fear at this and dropped his 
quarterstaff, instead opting to hide midst their belongings. 
 
 
        Cal dropped his bow to draw the short sword again, making a 'come get 
me' gesture with his other hand at the beast. He was rewarded with a low snarl 
followed by a chorus of clacking jaws.
 
 
        Suddenly the thing vanished, without making a sound, and Cal had a few 
heartbeats of confusion before the beast materialized right inside the reach of 
his outstretched arm. He let out a startled cry as it bore him to the ground.
 
 
        For William, time appeared to slow down to a crawl. He watched as Cal 
struggled beneath the evil hound thing, grunting, crying out in pain, then 
watched the rest of the monsters begin attacking as well. Many of the other 
creatures...blinked like the first one, some of them just charged. It felt like 
hours, fighting the beasts, being bitten a dozen times, hearing the others as 
if far away crying out. In reality it was maybe two desperate minutes.
 
 
        The end of the fight found William alone, buried beneath Dorian's bulk 
as he'd tried to shield the young man from one of the larger beasts, and 
fighting for his life with the same beast that had just finished off his 
companion. Desperate, tired, one arm trapped under the strangely bloodless 
corpse atop him, William could only gasp in the things fetid breath as it tried 
to rip his face off. He had his only free hand around the thing's throat to 
stop it from killing him, the teeth snapping so close to his face he could feel 
the concussion.
 
 
        Just when a sob broke from William's throat, as he prepared to let the 
monster end his struggle, a bright flickering light washed over him. The beast 
above him froze mid-snap, its pale eyes looking at something he could not see 
from his position, and it stopped trying to kill him for a span of several 
heartbeats.
 
 
        A roaring noise followed by a blast of heat...then the thing was gone 
with a yelp. There were several yelps, snarls, and other noises, before the 
night fell quiet once more. William let his hand fall into the wet grass, 
suddenly aware how badly he hurt, and stared at a fog-free sky full of stars.
 
 
        The flickering light moved, washing out his view of the sky, and 
something very bright forced him to close his eyes for a moment. Squinting up, 
William was unsure what he was seeing.
 
 
        At first it was just a bright wash of flame seen through his eyelashes, 
then it...dimmed enough that he could make out a vague human shape. It appeared 
to be a man, made out of rolling flames, the man was hard to look at directly, 
but it had a definite human shape. There were no features to the Pyre-man, but 
somehow William knew it was looking at him, and he wasn't scared of it.
 
 
        Pyre-man kneeled in the grass beside him, the damp grass hissing, then 
paused as it flickered briefly, growing dimmer. It reached out one of its 
hands, plunging it through Dorian's unmoving chest, before William could cry 
out in weak protest.
 
 
        He felt the flame limb enter his chest, it didn't hurt, and he looked 
at the Pyre-man's face in confusion. The face was much easier to gaze at, it 
had dimmed from a blaze to a flicker, giving him his first glace at its 
expression. It looked...scared? In pain? Impossible to tell for sure, as the 
fires that continually rolled over the features made them difficult to read.
 
 
>>>What? Wild!
 
 
 
        Briefly, William felt something tug inside him, it wasn't a physical 
sensation, but he felt it all the same. It was a very queer feeling, then 
something spoke to him from inside. It was more like listening to thoughts than 
hearing words, and also strangely intimate.
 
 
        <=Do not fear me...=>
 
 
        “I...I don't,” William stammered, “You saved me.”
 
 
        There was a pause where the Pyre-man regarded him, <=Drove them 
away...they will return...no time=> The thoughts seemed weak somehow; they were 
getting harder to grasp.
 
 
        William nodded, “I don't think I can move.”
 
 
        Flickering, the thing dimmed again briefly, <=We 
are...dying...wounded...together...survive=>
 
 
        Swallowing hard past his dry throat, William shook his head, he didn't 
want to die, “I don't understand.”
 
 
        It pointed first to him, then to itself, and shook its head slowly, 
<=separate...dead.=> Next it made a fist, <=together...strong.=>
 
 
        “How?” William asked in a whisper.
 
 
        Pyre-man leaned in close, dimming further so his “flesh” became 
speckled with ashes, <=bond with this one. Be one...not two.=>
 
 
        Whatever connection the flame creature had made was weakening it 
further, causing blackened bits to show through the flames of its body. 
Somehow, through the connection, William felt its grip slackening. Even so his 
body was cold and heavy despite the proximity of the living fire, he felt like 
sleep would be so blissful. He had to fight to make his thoughts connect.
 
 
        “Please,” the weakness of his voice scared him, “I don't want to d-.” 
William swallowed, unable to utter the word.
 
 
        The flame being appeared to sigh and collapse inwards, giving William 
the frightened impression that it had died, but as it collapsed it grew 
brighter until a little ball of fire drifted down the flame arm still inside 
him.
 
 
        He could feel it the instant it touched him, his whole body warmed, 
then burned until he gasped in agony. It felt as if his very self was being 
burned away, but the burning subsided into a comfortable feeling. He became 
acutely aware of his body and the warmth spreading to every tinniest piece. 
 
 
        Without knowing how long he lay there, absorbed in a feeling of 
comfortable oblivion, eventually he was forced to surface from the bonding. He 
felt decidedly strange, sort of disconnected from, yet still bound to, the 
waking world.
 
 
        He kept getting disparate flashes of memories, both being his own 
somehow, and he could not untangle them. Trying to puzzle them out gave him a 
headache, he spent long seconds trying to recall what a headache was and when 
he'd last had one. With his mind foggy, putting the wondering on hold, he 
turned his attention to his aching body.
 
 
        Vaguely, he remembered the man named Dorian atop him. Images came to 
him, the blond man grinning widely, stories shared by firelight. Sorrow claimed 
him at the same time as curiosity as to why this human had been so important. 
Wiping his face, his fingers came away damp...how odd.
 
 
        He regretted having to shove and wiggle his way out from under the 
corpse, then lay in the scorched grass for a bit to gather his strength. He 
felt this was very inefficient but, as there was not a nice hot fire nearby, he 
stood up eventually to look around.
 
 
        He stood in a patch of burnt grass beside a dead man, who was currently 
smoldering, and there were three other corpses nearby as well. Something about 
those four dead men bothered him; he could not think what, though he supposed 
if it had been important, he'd remember.
 
 
        Instead he searched through the trampled bags in the center of the area 
to find a large bag of trailfood, a handful of golden metal discs, a small 
fragrant leather pouch that seemed important, and a wooden chest slightly 
bigger than his outstretched hand. These things he gathered into a haphazard 
bundle, swung them over his shoulder, and began to walk away into the woods.
 
 
 
 
 
 
*       *       *
 
 
 
 
 
 
        Days passed in a sort of blurry fog. The man didn't think he was 
particularly injured, but it was as if he had two conflicting thoughts about 
everything. Like catching himself staring at a perfectly normal tree in 
complete confusion one day. These moments were disturbing, to say the least, so 
he did his best not to think about them too much. Luckily time appeared to help 
his condition, as these moments of conflict grew shorter in duration and 
strength.
 
 
        At one point he felt a strange...something settle over him, causing him 
to panic. Running didn't seem to make a difference; he didn't know what it was, 
though it made him afraid as well as uncomfortable. Whatever it was didn't ebb 
or go away, it clung to him like cobwebs, and it was a constant presence.
 
 
        Over the next week he felt random pains, particularly in his joints, as 
well as bouts of itchy patches on his skin. He knew he was transforming; he 
couldn't miss the thick soft black hair on his arms, or the way the lower half 
of his face slowly pushed out. He'd ditched his damaged shoes a while back 
after they stopped fitting properly; eventually his shirt went, too, after it 
became more of a nuisance to wear. 
 
 
        Growing tired easily was also a problem; he was running low on food 
despite the foraging he'd done since starting this venture, so he often had to 
take a seat for an afternoon doze. It was in one of these dozes, lying with his 
back against a tree, that he heard a voice. At first he thought it was one of 
the nightmares he suffered, before waking, but this voice sounded way too 
polite for such a thing. Upon opening his eyes he came face-to-face with a dark 
brown reptilian head with copper colored eyes looking right at him.
 
 
        He let out a manly scream of shock, shoving the packs, much lighter 
now, at the gargantuan snake. 
 
 
        Letting out a noticeably human scream of surprise of its own, the snake 
reared back itself, raising its arms to protect its face.
 
 
        Arms?
 
 
        The partially transformed man stared up from his spot on the ground, 
leaning back on his hands with his legs splayed before him, eyeing the 
half-human half-serpent. It seemed to be doing the very same thing.
 
 
        “What?” He asked, intelligently, his voice a rasping croak from disuse.
 
 
        “What?” The snake lowers its arms, seemingly confused. Fourteen feet 
long from nose to blunt tail, it was mostly covered in small tightly packed 
brown scales the color of milk chocolate, with its broad under-scales a light 
creamy yellow. It wore a skirt-like dark orange cloth around its middle where 
the waist would be on a person with a single strap holding it up over one 
shoulder. Strapped around the top of the garment was a medium sized pack 
resting against its spine.
 
 
        “I'm sorry if I scared you,” snake-man said, ”I was passing by and saw 
you lying here....I thought you might be hurt.”
 
 
        He stared up at the thing for a second before responding, “Are you a 
cursed human?”
 
 
        It paused for a few seconds, a forked black tongue popped from its 
mouth briefly, “Yes. I was a cursed human, but I'd prefer the term 'morphed' to 
'cursed.' It's more polite.” Softening his posture, the snake morph offered a 
hand to help the man up. 
 
 
        A moment passed where he sighed, then took the snake's cool, dry, hand 
and accepted help to his feet. They both mutually, silently, gathered the 
scattered items and replace them into a manageable bundle. After that they 
stared at each other in a sort of embarrassed moment of quiet.
 
 
        Breaking the moment by rubbing the back of his scaled head, the snake 
spoke first, “Listen...this is an awkward question but you do know you're 
partially transformed yourself? It looks like you've been out here for a while, 
the cur-I mean transformation, is already pretty far along.”
 
 
        He looked down at himself with a frown.
 
 
        His legs and feet had already mostly finished becoming digitigrade as 
well as being covered in long black hair. All except for the bottom of his 
feet, which were tipped with very bright orange fur. His hands were mostly 
normal but they, too, had begun showing signs of growing thick black pads. His 
torso was in various stages, sort of like a patchwork, of conversion as there 
were places one could still see pale skin beneath. A tiny tail-nub poked out 
over the top of his breeches, covered in orange-tipped fur duskier that that on 
his feet flowed all the way up his back and across both shoulders.
 
 
>>> One small comment. Might want to describe what ditigrade is.
 
 
 
        Strangest of all, his head had transformed in a patchwork manner, 
giving him a sort of frightening visage. The top right half of his face still 
appeared human, with one cinnamon colored eye, a shock of wheat hair, and an 
ear still apparent. The rest of his face was in transition, though. One 
triangular ear, somewhat stunted, was almost to the top of his head. His muzzle 
had already started showing itself. His nose changed by flattening out, his 
teeth becoming larger, and his left eye had gone a shocking shade of bright 
green.
 
 
        “It doesn't matter,” he gave a shuddering sigh.
 
 
        Concerned, the snake man reached out, patted his shoulder, then looked 
curiously at his own hand. He then placed his hand on the man's forehead, 
“You're burning up!”
 
 
        Confused, he put his own hand to his head, “Really? I feel fine.” His 
stomach chose this moment to growl very loudly. The blush could still be seen 
on the human side of his face.
 
 
        The snake regarded him a moment, tongue flicking out, “Here.” He 
reached behind him, his head rotating inhumanly (if that word could even apply 
anymore). He soon produced a package wrapped in paper. Undoing the twine 
revealed a sort of large meat pasty wrapped in cabbage leaves. 
 
 
        Offering the food, the snake nodded, “I was saving this for tomorrow's 
lunch but...I think I should get you to a healer.”
 
 
        Sheepishly taking the bundle, the young man dug into the pasty before 
answering, “Thanks.”
 
 
        Regarding him curiously again, the snake placed its hands on its 
hip-area, “Well maybe its just me being cold-blooded but...I still think you 
should come to the keep. I can tell you from experience, it will be easier if 
you can see others like us. It helps to know you can still be happy. Besides, 
we're supposed to bring lost morphs we find to the keep, to get them sorted.” 
 
 
        “I suppose I don't have many other choices, do I?” He asked, offering 
back the half-eaten pasty, “You can finish it. I don't want to eat all of your 
lunch.”
 
 
        “No!” The snaked waved him off, “No, you're fine! I'll go hunting 
tonight for us; you can finish that while we walk.” With this he turned swiftly 
and literally started to slither away.
 
 
        Hustling a bit, the man catches up, careful not to step on the snake's 
large tail. They made steady pace through the trees, headed north, both of them 
rather quiet for a time. It didn't take too long before he was finished with 
the pasty, unconsciously running a large tongue over his lips to sweep up 
crumbs.
 
 
        “So,” the snake asked suddenly, “What is your name? Mine is Psylaphen.”
 
 
        “I-” he paused, unsure, “I don't remember.” This was only partially a 
lie, as he could remember being called William, but he was also 
called something else, too. Trying to reconcile both sets of memories often 
left him confused and sad, so instead he'd chosen to be someone new. 
 
 
        “Hmm,” Psylaphen mused, eyeing him. “Well, as most of the others come 
to the keep on a stretcher, I guess you can count yourself lucky.” As he spoke 
he slid right over a fallen tree, which the former human had to walk around. 
Upon seeing his crestfallen face on the other side, the snake bowed its head 
slightly. “Sorry. I don't mean to make fun of you.”
 
 
        The man shook his head.
 
 
        “Well,” Psylaphen began, rubbing the scales at his throat, “would it be 
rude if I gave you a name? At least until you remember yours,” he amended 
quickly.
 
 
        Meeting those slitted pupils, the former William gave a weak smile.
 
 
        “How about,” Psylaphen looked him up and down a little, then pointed at 
him with a triumphant nod, “Noir?”
 
 
        “Nwar?” He scrunched up his brows.
 
 
        “N-O-I-R,” the serpent spelled out, “I read it in a book at the keep 
once. It mean's 'black' in another language.”
 
 
        Looking down at himself, he let out half a chuckle, “You'd literally 
name me for my fur?” It was a strange thing, to have to consider a name for 
yourself, but given everything that had happened so far...maybe something so 
simple and exotic was just what he needed.
 
 
        “It was a first attempt!” Psylaphen said, somewhat defensively, “Give 
me-”
 
 
        “I like it,” he decided. “It fits.”
 
 
        Taken aback, the reptile reared up a bit, then dipped down in a small 
bow. “Well, Noir,” he says with amusement in his voice, “It's nice to meet you.”
 
 
        Bowing back stiffly, Noir matched the smile heard in the snake's voice, 
“Nice to meet you, Psylaphen.”
 
 
        “You can call me Syl,” he explained. “Come on. We have a long trail 
ahead.”
 
 
        As Syl the snake morph started to glide off, the newly dubbed Noir took 
a deep breath of warm air. Letting it out slowly, he allowed some of the 
tension bleed away. He was alive, he wasn't alone, and he didn't have to focus 
on things before the bonding for a time. Starting anew felt right, a new 
chapter to start...
 
 
        A new chapter at Metamor Keep.
 
 
>>>Nice story. Good descriptions and it flows along nicely! Were there any 
>>>other survivors?
 
 
Chris
The Lurking Fox
MK Controller
 
 
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