Well, after literally years of writing and too many stops and starts to count, 
I have finally finished the first draft of this story.  I think it was three 
years ago that I started the story, and hoped to have it done before Anthrocon. 
 Three Anthrocons later, I can finally start posting it for real.

I did post the first few parts to the list when first I had been writing it, 
but it has been so long that I think it’s worth the time to repost those 
sections before getting to the new parts.  Also, a few things have changed 
since that original post, so it might also help prevent confusion.

-LurkingWolf


The Illusive Chain

Link 1: Coincidence

<I>March 5, 708CR</i>

The silver light of the full moon emerged from behind the clouds, lending an 
eerie glow to the white powder and leafless trees that made up the winter 
forest.  Across the quiet expanse of woodland that surrounded the Keep, a trio 
of men moved along with surprisingly little caution.  The snow muffled their 
footfalls, and the promise of the end of another stressful patrol had removed 
perhaps a little of their care.  One form moved ahead, showing both speed and 
stamina as it crested one rise after another, barely slowing even as the man’s 
companions fell further and further behind.

Balrog gasped out a gust of steam as he pulled up short after another rise, 
squinting at the form of their leader as he extended his easy lead.  He was 
joined a moment later by the last of his companions.  The young man was one of 
the lucky age-regressed Keepers who could assume a more mature age than most.  
As he stood beside the disguised lutin, there was little difference in their 
heights.  There was a clear difference in their maturity levels at least; 
Balrog, even shrouded in an illusion, showed the effects of dozens of years of 
battle.  The spells he had designed to disguise his body exaggerated those old 
wounds to cover the maze of tattoos that helped him maintain his vital 
illusion.  The young man off his right shoulder, however, was a stringbean, 
permanently trapped as a boy who would never quite manage to mature into a man. 
 His skin was marred by a few pesky scars, but not a one of them had been 
caused by weapons.  It quietly gave testament to how close his apparent age was 
to his actual age, and made it clear that he had not been in the field for long.

That was not to say that he was a burden to his patrol.  The quiver of javelins 
that he carried on his back had been used to great effect not a month prior.  
That day he had put a pair of the deadly instruments to their fullest use.  The 
thin-bladed scimitar on his right hip had been similarly bloodied in that 
battle, though only once.  That he had done most of the work in killing a band 
of five mercenaries that the group had encountered on patrol had certainly 
raised Balrog’s already high opinion of the boy.

The young human smiled and clapped a hand on Balrog’s shoulder.  “Getting 
tired, old man?”

The good will the boy had earned was, however, only barely enough to save him 
from more than a severe glare in response.  Balrog could barely manage to laugh 
convincingly.  “The commander is setting an uncomfortable pace this evening,” 
he grumbled.

“When does he not?” was the rueful response.

“Better catch up with him before he notices that he’s lost us,” Balrog said, 
getting his legs moving once again.

His fellow groaned before following, but move he did.  “I could go for a good 
drink after this patrol.”

The disguised lutin did manage to laugh at that.  “You know you’re not old 
enough to actually have what I could honestly call a good drink,” he pointed 
out.

The boy shook his head as he matched Balrog’s strides.  “And how is Donnie 
going to verify my age?  I tell you, if you are old enough to be Cursed, you 
should be old enough to drink the hardest liquor that the Keep can brew.  I’m 
fighting for the Keep’s defense; if I’m old enough to die on the battlefield I 
should be old enough to drink myself to death.”

Balrog shook his head with an amused smile.  “Vic, at your age I would not be 
so hasty to try to kill myself regardless of the method.  With people like 
Nathan setting a sprinter’s pace in a marathon, the world needs no help finding 
ways to kill you.”

Vic shook his head, but kept moving.  They had almost completely lost sight of 
the patrol commander, save for a few fleeting glimpses as the man darted 
expertly from shadow to shadow.  His black fur aided him greatly in his 
attempts at camouflage, although his almost rushed pace complicated that matter 
more than a little.

A few moments later, however, the man disappeared completely.  This sudden 
departure from the norm encouraged Balrog to increase his own speed.  The 
commander’s attitude always leaned closer to the dramatic than the stealthy, 
and the thought of this backfiring was hardly new to Balrog’s mind.  If Nathan 
had managed to run into the teeth of an enemy party without the aid of his 
companions he would no doubt be able to hold his own for some time, but the 
disadvantage of numbers would be concerning.

His worries were assuaged moments later as he saw the man again, silhouetted 
against the trunk of a large tree, looking at his surroundings in a way that 
almost seemed distracted.  His black fur, touched by the light of the full 
moon, looked closer to silver, and the strange design of his clothing, which 
mixed white, grey, and black in a chaotic patchwork, was easy to lose against 
the background of snow and trees.  Balrog kept his pace up, and soon had 
reached the quiet wolf.

“Commander?”  Balrog moved up next to the patrol commander, gasping for his 
breath.  “Is something wrong?”

The wolf turned to look at him, but he didn’t speak for a few moments.  By the 
time he did, Vic had come up alongside the two of them, looking confused but 
clearly more focused on catching his breath than on asking about the reason for 
the halt.

“Something’s wrong,” the wolf finally said.

“Do you know what it is?” Vic asked.

The wolf began to cast his gaze across the snow again as though considering his 
answer.  “I’m not certain, it’s just…  It’s only a feeling; I do not know what 
it could mean.”

Balrog rubbed the back of his head.  “Nothing specific enough to act on?” he 
asked, almost sounding hopeful.

The wolf dropped into a crouch and closed his eyes as though concentrating on 
something important.  He hesitated again before saying anything further.  “I 
don’t know what this is, but it’s too strong a feeling to ignore.”  He bounced 
on his paws for a few moments, pressing his palms together before him and 
rubbing them back and forth.  “I don’t think we should go to the Keep.”

Victor groaned and kicked sourly at a drift of snow.  “Any chance you might be 
wrong?” he said in almost a requesting tone.

The wolf shook his head slowly, but surely.  “Hareford,” he muttered.

Victor groaned outright and began to march around the area in frustration, 
grumbling about missed drinks and warm beds.  Balrog decided to continue the 
conversation.  “Why Hareford?” he asked.  “The Glen is closer by several hours; 
even Lake Barnhardt is a shorter journey.  Is something happening at the 
Outpost?”

The wolf remained silent for a few more moments.  “I don’t know,” he finally 
stated.  “That’s as much as I can divine from what I have been given.”

Balrog chuckled bitterly.  “What good is being psychic if you can hardly 
understand your own visions?” he remarked.

The wolf stood and favored him with a sympathetic smile.  “You know that as 
well as any of us Balrog.  It is confusing, yes, but when has this ability ever 
proven less than helpful?”  He turned and took a few steps towards Outpost, and 
away from the Keep.  “There must be something important at Hareford.  We’ll 
find out what when we get there.”

Vic still looked sour to the idea, but he knew better than to make it an issue. 
 He nodded to the commander and stood up straight.  “Commander, could we at 
least find time for some rest?  I do not know if I could remain alert for the 
entire journey.”

The wolf nodded.  “Of course.  We’ll find a more sheltered area and take a few 
hours to camp.  I’ll take first watch; perhaps having some time to consider 
will reveal why we are needed in Hareford.”

The trio turned back to the north, the black wolf taking the lead once again.  
Victor looked at Balrog in exasperation, the older man giving him an 
understanding smile. The boy responded in kind, and the two of them once again 
moved to catch up with their commander.  It seemed that it would be a longer 
night than they had originally expected.


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