Good!  Thanks for clearing that up!  Looks good.

   Chris
   The Lurking Fox

 

 

 

-----Original Message-----
From: Hallan Mirayas <[email protected]>
To: Metamor Keep <[email protected]>
Sent: Mon, Nov 20, 2017 12:11 am
Subject: [Mkguild] Update to "Unleashing the Beast" (formerly "Homecoming")



The last scene of UtB, where Drift bites down on Whisper confused some people.  
I have rewritten the section to make it more clear what's going on.  My 
apologies that it took me so long.  Depression sucks.


An updated version will be sent to MK-Submit momentarily.



Hallan


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   Something shifted in the creature's face, and the massive wolf loosened its 
bite. Backing away, it pawed first at its head, then at its collar, metal claws 
raking fruitlessly against metal spikes in an ever-increasing frenzy. Another 
self-destructive explosion seemed imminent.
 
   Then Misha broke free of his fast-disintegrating ice prison. He hefted 
Whisper into a crossing block.  "Drift-"
 
   KILL HI-
 
   Edward, son of Alan Snow, whirled with death in his eyes and slammed his 
jaws shut on the black axe's shaft. The runic weapon struck back instantly, 
ripping life energy from the beast like a wolverine eviscerating a rabbit. 
Carcarak, creation of Revonos, desperate to stay alive, pulled every last drop 
of daedra energy from the broken linking spell embedded in the collar around 
his neck, devouring every spell and enchantment ever woven into it or through 
it. The collar, overstrained far beyond anything for which it had ever been 
designed, flared white-hot for a tenth of a second before detonating, hurling 
Misha, Whisper, and the War Wolf in three separate directions.
 
   Silence fell, broken only by the TCHOKK of Whisper burying itself two feet 
into a boulder as it landed.
 






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