On 8/19/11 2:48 PM, "Michael R. Brown" <[email protected]> wrote:
> We start in a wee little rainstorm with > the narrator checking his watch,.... Darn, I always thought of the start as: "What," he hollers. "Blackbird." But in reality ZaMM starts: "I can see by my watch,.... No rain though, that's pages later. I'm not trying to be pedant. It's just interesting how we each grab a screen capture images of "the start", "key points", and "the end". They may or may not be as they are "really" portrayed in the text. >.......and end with an opening out to the majestic > view of the Bay, with the well-ordered city of happiness... Yeah my image for "the end" is rolling over the Golden Gate Bridge into San Fran, but that's not mentioned. The last town mentioned is Novato. But in San Rafael, they could have taken the 540 into Richmond then Oakland and your "well order city of happiness" would then be seriously difficult to visualize. Dave Moq_Discuss mailing list Listinfo, Unsubscribing etc. http://lists.moqtalk.org/listinfo.cgi/moq_discuss-moqtalk.org Archives: http://lists.moqtalk.org/pipermail/moq_discuss-moqtalk.org/ http://moq.org/md/archives.html
