*sufficiently cowed*

When I said open to the public, I meant for people to be able to review. 
  But the rest of what you said is appropriate, and I don't want to be 
foolish.

> The verifying doc has been moved here:
>   http://moz.zope.org/contribute/writing/verifying
> You can link to it there. If you would change the HTML to lower case,
> as directed by the Style Guide, I'll make the document public.

Argh.  :) I am amnesiac.  Good timing for you to mention that, as I'm 
now working on a spec for "Editing Documentation"... ;)

> I suggest also that you change
>   <P><EM>Note:
> to
>   <p class="note">
> 
> and 
>   <P><EM>
> to
>   <p class="remark">
> 
> The latter certainly should not be emphasized. It's an aside, not
> something that should draw attention.

Noted, and thank you.

> Content-wise, you might also suggest that one simply *asks* an expert
> in the area if the document has become outdated or not. This is
> probably the best way to verify architecture & design docs.

Sounds reasonable.  I'll make that change.


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