Daniel Wang wrote:
thx for your comments
html version is up:
http://www.geocities.com/stolenclover/backstage/wincvs.html
* "barrier" should be "barriers" in first sentence.
* Might expand "mozilla.org or mozdev.org" to "mozilla.org or other
Mozilla project sponsors"
since I think there are projects on sourceforge and such as well.
* might change "hacking" and "hack" to "modifying" and "modify" to
avoid the hacker-cracker misassociation
* "hobbyst" should be "hobbyist"
* "use CVS" instead of "do CVS"
* change "graphical tutorial" to "graphical source manager"
* "instuctions on most CVS" instead of "instructions to most CVS"
* "local CVS repository" instead of "local CVS directory"
* at least for the instances before "What is CVS?" use <abbr
title="Concurrent Version System"> for "CVS".
* In the "What is CVS?" paragraph, use <dfn> around "CVS".
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