In reaction to the story about the salary increases for top City employees.
 
Craig: although if one reads this paragraph about the salary increases very
very very carefully it is clear that you have stated it correctly.  But if
one reads it quickly, a person might get the impression that  Colvin Roy,
Zimmermann, Schiff, Zerby, Lilligren and Johnson Lee voted in favor of the
salary increase, when just the opposite is true. 
 
Read just the red part of the quote below and see what kind of impression
you get. 
 
Your story said, "Zerby's move to block the implementation of the salary
increases lost on a 7-6 vote, with council members Sandra Colvin Roy, Dean
Zimmermann, Gary Schiff, Zerby, Robert Lilligren, and Natalie Johnson Lee
voting in favor and Barbara Johnson, Paul Ostrow, Scott Benson, Lisa
Goodman, Barret Lane, and Don Samuels voting against".
 
Perhaps you might have said, Zerby's move to block the implementation of the
salary increases lost on a 7-6 vote, with council members Sandra Colvin Roy,
Dean Zimmermann, Gary Schiff, Zerby, Robert Lilligren, and Natalie Johnson
Lee voting against the salary increase and Barbara Johnson, Paul Ostrow,
Scott Benson, Lisa Goodman, Barret Lane, and Don Samuels voting for the
salary increase".
 
 
Peace,
 
Dean Zimmermann
Mpls City Council - Ward 6
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