Hi Behcet,
On 06.01.2014 18:32, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
I don't know about others (Dirk and Sebastian) but I would like to see a
reply to my review.
Dirk and Sebastian had only few straight-forward editorials/typos ...
which have been just corrected.
Regarding your review, please see inline:
On 24.10.2013 22:49, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:>
Here are my comments on this draft. You can take it as part of WGLC
comments. WGLC will be issued shortly.
abstract and introduction
selective route optimization schemes - add using multicast tree mobility
anchor or multicast capable LMA
Details of the schemes are already part of the introduction (incl.
various refs). For the sake of conciseness of the abstract, we would
prefer to stick to the abstract summary "selective route optimization
schemes", instead of naming all approaches individually.
Figs 1 & 2 - change their placement and reformat, this may lead to the
whole figure in one page
Thanks - done.
Sec. 3.2.2 - to enable multicast data
transition from an MN - replace transition with transmission?
Thanks - done.
Sec. 3.2.3.1 sending
PIM registers to the RP - this is explained in Sec. 4.3.2, add pointer
RPF (Reverse Path Forwarding) - Reverse Path Forwarding (RPF)
BIDIR PIM - BIDIR-PIM
Thanks - all done.
Sec. 3.2.4
the multicast
routing information base (MRIB) of the MAG - I thought this was not
possible? later on seems to be clarified in Sec. 4.3 & 4.4 (I mean
according to our face-to-face conversations in the past?)
In this draft, we describe the setting of an MRIB in agreement with the
topology of the access network. Like a unicast RIB, an MRIB can of
course always express a regular, topology-oriented routing according to
destination addresses in IP headers.
Our discussions, which also took place on the mailing list earlier and
in WG meetings, were concerned with policy-based PMIP routing according
to source addresses. This cannot be expressed in a regular MRIB.
However, we are not talking about policy routing here in the draft, so
no conflict.
Sec. 3.2.5
There is no mechanism to suppress upstream
forwarding in the absence of receivers. - this is solved in Sec.
5, add a pointer to the section that brings some solution
Thanks, done.
Sec. 4.3 4.4 & Fig. 3 (b)
see comment above on PIM at MAG
Thanks - done,
Sec. 4.3.6 should be subsection of 4.3.5?
No, as Section 4.3.5 is about PIM-SSM, and Section 4.3.5 discusses an
orthogonal aspect (Handover Optimization) for both, PIM-SM and PIM-SSM.
Sec. 5.3 Operations at the Multicast Sender - the operation described
here is not performed by the MN which is the multicast source/sender, so
clarify
same in Sec. 5.4. Operations at the Multicast Listener
Thanks - both done.
Sec. 5.4
ASM with IGMPv3/MLDv2 - why not have this discussion in the first case,
i.e. ASM with IGMPv2/MLDv1?
The first itemization is about ASM with IGMPv2/MLDv1 - it's on the
previous page, so may be you overlooked.
Fig. 1 caption is too long - shorten it and carry the text to Sec. 3.1.
Thanks, done.
In the abstract,
This document describes the support of mobile multicast senders - This
document describes an experimental protocol to support mobile multicast
senders
Thanks, also done ... even though I missed to correct a preposition ...
it's already corrected for the next version.
Best regards,
Thomas
On 25.11.2013 18:38, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
Dear all,
WGLC on
draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-__source-06
has ended.
The authors, please submit your revised version.
Regards,
Behcet
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