Thanks Behcet,
for enjoying the Superball. Who won?
Regarding the draft, we will provide an update soon that will include
previous feedback from the WG, as well.
What we already can say right now:
We won't rip the draft into pieces and turn it into a fragment, as you
please to suggest. Content, coverage and scope of this draft has been
under intense discussion since 2010 with two ADs (Jari and Brian)
involved. The last clear roadmap on the subject was given by Brian in
the Berlin meeting.
Behcet, every document we have worked out, you tried to destroy at the
very last minute.
* For RFC 6224 you requested changes to make it technically completely
wrong.
* You requested to garble the source draft a couple weeks ago.
* Now you ask for ripping apart the *fmipv6 protocol systematic.
I don't know why you're doing this ... but it's always against the
quality of the documents, against the IETF consensus policy ... and it's
always completely useless.
So let's just forget this part of your Superball-Review.
Cheers,
Thomas
On 03.02.2014 00:39, Behcet Sarikaya wrote:
Dear all,
I finished my review while watching Superball 2014 :-), here it is:
- remove MIPv6 from the title
Sec. 2
In addition, the following terms are
introduced:
where are the terms?
Sec. 3.1
subnet link
use on of them
when the group is
natively received.
What does this mean, please explain
As group membership information are
s/are/is
Sec. 3.2
FMIPv6 coverage is out of scope as it applies to MIPv6, so remove
this section
Other sections may need adjustment based on this
Sec. 4.1.1
As FMIPv6 is out of scope, this section needs to be rewritten to
cover PFMIPv6 (if any)
Section 5
Here you may add one sentence saying that these structures can apply
to MIPv6?
Sec. 5.3
The size of this option in 8 octets
s/in/is
Last but not least, I think the draft finishes without a discussion of
why this solution is needed. We need some text on this. I don't know if
the reference "FMIPv6-Analysis" could be useful.
Regards,
Behcet
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