Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-08: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I have a couple of questions about text clarity. Please consider them, along with any other comments you receive from other reviewers. And I should say that MIP/PMIP drafts I've often read have been dense for me, and this one is clearer than most - thank you for that. 4.3.2. Operations of PIM in Phase One (RP Tree) Source handover management in PIM phase one admits low complexity and remains transparent to receivers. In addition, the source register tunnel management of PIM is a fast protocol operation and little overhead is induced thereof. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I didn't understand this text clearly. Is it saying something like "little overhead is introduced"? 7. Security Considerations In addition to proper authorization checks of MNs, rate controls at routing agents and replicators MAY be required to protect the agents and the downstream networks. In ^^^^^^^^ is this "may be needed"? The passive voice doesn't make the text easy to parse (and I'm thinking this MAY is not a 2119 MAY, but that's a separate issue). particular, MLD proxy implementations at MAGs SHOULD carefully procure for automatic multicast state extinction on the departure of ^^^^^^^ This word doesn't fit (a quick google of online directionaries pointed toward "procure" as obtaining something by special effort, for example). I wondered if you meant "probe", but I'm guessing. MNs, as mobile multicast listeners in the PMIPv6 domain will in general not actively terminate group membership prior to departure. Consequently, implementations of peering-enabled proxies SHOULD take particular care on maintaining (varying) IP configurations at the downstream in ^^^^^^^^^ I don't understand what "varying" means in this context (my first guess was that it was being used as a synonym for "maintaining", which didn't work). Is it needed at all? a reliable and timely manner (see [RFC6224] for requirements on PMIPv6-compliant implementations of MLD proxies). _______________________________________________ multimob mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/multimob
