Hi netbehaviourists

I've been working on this project (off and on) over the past few
months, in fact it was intended to be part of DIWO2 but I didn't get
far enough with it, though I did manage to submit some of the drawings
before the deadline:

http://davemiller.org/projects/bonuses/

It's a response to a public debate last October at St Paul's
Cathedral, where the question was ethics, and the role morality should
play in the marketplace. I felt so strongly about all this I wanted to
explore the subject further and add to the debate. There's been lots
of news and discussion over the Internet over the past few months, so
I've had lots of source material to work with.

In its present form, the project is a simple interactive narrative -
it's just a series of hyperlinked pages - and fixed paths through the
'story'. Each page consists of random css boxes faded into photos and
drawings, which are positioned and sized at random.

I've decided to show what I've done so far, as in my mind it's not
"finished" - but I just wanted to get it out there and ask for
feedback, as I'm unsure where to take it next.

How do you think I could improve it? Or make it more powerful? I want
to somehow capture and represent public feeling on this. I also want
to make people think (and act), and though I think people have
probably been saturated with the subject by now, I don't think the UK
media (in particular) gives the bigger picture. Any thoughts on how I
should take this further?

I have been thinking of how to make the interface better - one that
encourages more exploration. I could add the facility to upload text
and pictures, to enrich each page, but also add new pages (nodes).

Anyway, any feedback - however harsh and critical - is very much appreciated

Hope to hear from you!

thanks, Dave
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