Thanks very much Edward! The Inklewriter software helped me a lot and
really speeded up the authoring, though could be improved I think. It's one
helluva deep and tangled story though and very useful to approach this type
of multi layered story in this way. If I had time I'd like to make it more
visual. Was great fun making it but quite revolting researching!
Cheers dave
On 4 Nov 2014 19:50, "Edward Picot" <[email protected]> wrote:

>
> Dave -
>
> Blimey, this is explosive stuff. Leaving the political aspect of it on one
> side for a moment, the non-linear exposition works really well. I do wonder
> if some people might go through it just once and not bother to go back and
> explore the other 'threads', because I almost did that myself - but then I
> found myself wanting to give the story another try, and once I'd seen two
> of the 'threads' it was impossible not to read the whole thing. Absolutely
> riveting, once you get into it.
>
> - Edward
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