paula have now viewed it on non iOS, even better i dunno, it feels authentic to my own experience, probably has something to do with mirroring- maybe gender too- have had this conversation many times
On Mon, Mar 30, 2015 at 7:33 PM, Pall Thayer <[email protected]> wrote: > I agree with Alan, I think you should experiment with more aggressive > approaches. The visual impact is all very soft but the content isn't. The > "shut up" blinds are very subtle but "shut up" is anything but a subtle > phrase. > > The aesthetic interplay between the text banners and background is quite > nice but I feel like it needs some more "in your face"-ness to it. > > On Mon, Mar 30, 2015 at 12:30 PM, Alan Sondheim <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> >> >> Hi Paula, >> >> I watched this and noticed it looped around; I saw that also in the page >> source. I really like the topic and your handling of it, but the space is >> slow; you're talking about noise/buzzing, a kind of hysteria buiding up, >> but the reading pace doesn't follow suit, ad the reaader waits for the next >> phrase to appear. I do like the open-ended aspect of the piece, which could >> apply either to physical or psychological or imaginary issues. The turning >> 'shut up' bars also worked well - also as a kind of interference - they >> protrudced constantly into the space. I'd like to see where you go from >> here - >> >> - Alan >> >> >> >> On Mon, 30 Mar 2015, Paula Musgrove wrote: >> >> Hi >>> Thought I might share my first piece of net art. I leave it open to >>> interpretation and welcome any responses. >>> >>> http://www.writtleart.org/PaulaM/shutupanim.html >>> >>> (Does not work well with Safari on iOS) >>> >>> Thanks >>> Paula >>> >>> >>> >> == >> email archive http://sondheim.rupamsunyata.org/ >> web http://www.alansondheim.org / cell 718-813-3285 >> music: http://www.espdisk.com/alansondheim/ >> current text http://www.alansondheim.org/tc.txt >> == >> >> _______________________________________________ >> NetBehaviour mailing list >> [email protected] >> http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour >> > > > > -- > ***************************** > Pall Thayer > artist > http://pallthayer.dyndns.org > ***************************** > > _______________________________________________ > NetBehaviour mailing list > [email protected] > http://www.netbehaviour.org/mailman/listinfo/netbehaviour >
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