Excellent, thanks! Queueing fixes to the below up for next version.

> On Dec 8, 2015, at 12:14 AM, Jonathan Hansford <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> I’ve picked up some possible typos in the document. Being British, I accept 
> some of these may purely reflect different approaches to a common (!) 
> language.
>  
> Section 2
> ·         s/to developing YANG model/to developing a YANG model
> ·         s/benefits that appeals/benefits that appeal
> ·         s/this documents suggests/this document suggests
> ·         s/YANG Models describes/YANG Models describe
> ·         s/Layering of models allow for/Layering of models allows for
> ·         s/e.g/e.g.
> ·         s/with experience from/with experience of
> Section 2.1
> ·         s/YANG models defines/YANG models define
> Section 3
> ·         s/and to Network Service/and Network Service
> Section 3.1
> ·         s/lifecycle of these models are/lifecycle of these models is
> Section 3.2
> ·         s/to, or adopted by/to or adopted by
> ·         s/lifecycle of these models are/lifecycle of these models is
> ·         Section 3.3
> ·         s/what is covered/that covered
>  
> HTH,
>  
> Jonathan
>  
> 
> From: [email protected]
> Sent: 08 December 2015 02:17
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: [netmod] I-D 
> Action:draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-00.txt
>  
>  
>  
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the NETCONF Data Modeling Language Working Group 
> of the IETF.
>  
>         Title           : YANG Model Classification
>         Authors         : Dean Bogdanovic
>                           Benoit Claise
>                           Carl Moberg
>                 Filename        : 
> draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-00.txt
>                 Pages           : 9
>                 Date            : 2015-12-07
>  
> Abstract:
>    The YANG [RFC6020] data modeling language is currently being
>    considered for a wide variety of applications throughout the
>    networking industry at large.  Many standards defining organizations,
>    open source software projects, and vendors are using YANG to develop
>    and publish models of configuration, state data and operations for a
>    wide variety of applications.  At the same time, there is currently
>    no well-known terminology to categorize various types of YANG models.
>  
>    A consistent terminology would help with the categorization of
>    models, assist in the analysis the YANG data modeling efforts in the
>    IETF and other organizations, and bring clarity to the YANG-related
>    discussions between the different groups.
>  
>    This document describes a set of concepts and associated terms to
>    support consistent classification of YANG models.
>  
>  
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification/
>  
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-yang-model-classification-00
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>  
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