I have reviewed this and do not believe it is ready for publication.
- draft appears in several places
- TBD occurs in one
- it would seem that there are two modules in this I-D but only one is
registered in s.7
- in s.7 I read
prefix: syslog reference:
which I found odd - ah, it means
prefix: syslog
reference:
formatting could be better.
- VRF I know what it means but do not know if your definition is the
same as mine - is there a definition anywhere in an RFC to reference?
- s.3
" The following digram shows syslog messages
flowing from a message producer, through the group level suppression
filter, and if passed by the group filter to message distributors
where
further suppression filtering can take place."
Well yes, I see a digram of message producer and message distributors
but no group level suppression filter (which would, I suppose, make it a
trigram)
- s.3.1 what is the merit of using this explanation of the module as
opposed to the standard one?
- enumeration {selector-severity-operator-config}?
string {selector-match-processing-config}?
spill over the line (many times) which reflects the fact that they are
looooong - I think that this does not aid understanding nor accuracy of
implementation
4.1 prefix syslogtypes;
again, long, especially for a prefix
WG Chairs - who are they at present? I have lost track:-)
4.1 What a lot of features? Again, makes things more complex, more
error prone - are they all really needed?
I have to get into the detail of the module.
Tom Petch
----- Original Message -----
From: "Lou Berger" <lber...@labn.net>
To: "netmod WG" <netmod@ietf.org>
Cc: <netmod-cha...@ietf.org>; <draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-mo...@ietf.org>
Sent: Monday, February 29, 2016 8:50 PM
Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-06
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